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Somehow the original was deleted. I really hate it because I appreciate all the readers who commented and offered congratulations. ~Susan

I confess and waive all my rights Premeditated crime in plain sight Songs will be written ‘bout my spree I’m guilty of “love in the first degree”* Duly convicted to a life sentence Gonna serve my time, it's my penance An early release is not for me I’m locked in your love for eternity Written 3/2/2016 *’Love In The First Degree’ by Alabama appears on the album Alabama (1980)

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Date: 5/9/2016 1:01:00 PM
Absolutely brilliant and beautiful. A great 7 for me friend.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 3/20/2018 8:01:00 AM
Awesome! Thank you!
Date: 3/24/2016 9:05:00 AM
Susan, I know you must be so disappointed at losing your original poem, it is quite wonderful and I am loving it 7, did it place in the contest ?
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Susan Gentry
Date: 3/20/2018 8:02:00 AM
Thank you!! I believe it did...
Date: 3/22/2016 11:43:00 AM
Thank you for reposting, Susan.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 3/20/2018 7:59:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 3/22/2016 10:42:00 AM
Wow Susan this is so clever! I will make it a favorite!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 3/20/2018 7:58:00 AM
Thanks michael!
Date: 3/22/2016 10:16:00 AM
It's just as good ...lol...
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Susan Gentry
Date: 3/20/2018 7:58:00 AM
Thanks!

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