Insane Jane Poet Blank verse

I'M Far But I'M Near

Although it feels I'm far just know I'm near
Physically absent, my dear
But always in your heart, I need you to know I'm here
Torn from my baby boy at 18 months
Leaving you to survive such unthinkable taunts
I've  watched  you grow over the years and I  must say I'm incredibly  proud of the man you've become
 I know at times my memorial stories are as unhealed scars but when you hang your head low  baby look  to the stars 
For I am your Guardian angel...you  are a conquer   I'll  see you through the pain and the awes 
My baby, my son, my one and only prized possession  I'm  sorry you  were  Robbed  of my love and affection 
But your  father did awesome as my life ended yours however just begun
Don't  be sad my love, don't  allow heaviness to grip your heart but  instead think happy thoughts and know most importantly  I'm far but I'm near
Physically  absent my dear 
But in your  heart shall I continue  to live

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Skat A July 25, 2015 at 11:31 PM InSane:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~ Insane Jane July 30, 2015 at 4:18 PM Im upset I didnt get the chance to see it

Poet Destroyer A July 5, 2015 at 3:05 AM Roshanique, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Insane Jane July 5, 2015 at 7:58 PM Thank you

Viv Wigley July 5, 2015 at 2:04 AM Lovely, strong write, Roshanique. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Here's hoping that you enjoy sharing and reading your work with us like-minded wordsmiths. have fun. Viv x Insane Jane July 5, 2015 at 7:59 PM Thanks you guys

Skat A July 4, 2015 at 7:55 PM Roshanique Slydell,,, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Insane Jane July 5, 2015 at 7:57 PM Thanks i love to express my self through writing