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I'M Done You Can Clean Up Now

She’s gone but I remember how She would say “I’m done you can clean up now.” Not with words of course, but with swish of tail And I’d obey her without fail. Since I have reached that stage of life, I’m no longer caretaker or a wife, I’d like to be indulged as was my cat, As irresponsible as that. I would dine upon the finest fare, Use lots of dishes, I wouldn’t care. Like kitty, I’d be a real high brow; Say, “I’ve finished, you can clean up now”. Joyce Johnson For Constance's Woman Cat contest

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Date: 9/7/2010 4:22:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in Constance~A Rambling Poet's~ contest "Cat Poems~~". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2010 2:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this heartwarming poem of remembrance of your dear cat.
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Date: 9/3/2010 6:28:00 PM
Congratulations! Joyce a cool ideal put to your pen. I enjoyed your couplet. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/3/2010 5:38:00 PM
Congratulations on this win in Constance's contest, Joyce
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Date: 9/3/2010 3:47:00 AM
Lovely picture you have painted dear Joyce. Many congrats.
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Date: 9/2/2010 7:05:00 PM
My first cat would fall asleep on our old TV set because it was warm/hot on top. I remember watching "Dallas" as his tail would fall on J.R. 's face :) Or he would watch TV with us and the movie would have subtitles. He would jump to catch the translation from the bottom of the screen :) Congrats on you well deserved win, dear Joyce. Thanks for your comments too. Love, iolanda
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Date: 9/2/2010 6:42:00 PM
congrats on your win with this wonderful entry
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Date: 9/2/2010 6:13:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your purr fect win in the CAT contest... a humorous piece and another wonderful victory luv..enjoy and have a dafe and happy weekend.. for the holiday..with luv..
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Date: 9/2/2010 6:09:00 PM
Like a real high brow....which indeed they are!! Cute poem, Joyce! Congratulations on your win! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 9/2/2010 5:38:00 PM
Oh, to have the regal life of a cat! Cute poem, Joyce. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/23/2010 8:19:00 AM
love it, good luck in the contest
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Date: 8/22/2010 4:59:00 PM
yes Joyce ..no doubt about it..you got them kitties down pat
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