I'M Coming

I'm coming dear,
I'm coming there,
The day has been long,
And for home I so long,
The buzzing of the buses,
The street noises,
Have filled my head,
And my heart is dead,
My joints ache,
My head rotates,
Spins,
Till it feels,
Like a street football,
But I'm coming dear,
Spray the house,
With your smile,
Tie your joy,
To the door posts,
Smear your embrace,
On it's hinges,
Rain your sweetness,
All through the bedroom space,
I'm coming home dear,
I'm coming,
For your healing touch,
Your tight embrace,
Your warm presence,
....That revives life.

Word Craft
2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 3:11 AM
- Miss your beautiful poem,Word !!! - Have a nice day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Ougo Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 6:24 AM
Thanks dearie...i have been working on my first anthology and now I'm done..kindly let me have your email address so i can send you a pdf version.I'd appreciate your perspective..thanks, you can send me a message so i can get yours,mine is [email protected]
Widjanarko Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 8:47 AM
Woow, really romantic, really a lovely poem for a lovely day :D glad for reading this one tonight :D wishing you a great day :D - hug, yanny
Ougo Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 2:40 AM
oh thanks dear..Wishing you a beautiful day too....smiles..:-)
Banks Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 9:10 PM
"Spray the house with your smile, tie your joy to the door posts smear your embrace on its hinges . . . I think I'm in love with this poem! Lol thanks for sharing this. M
Ougo Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 2:54 AM
Oh my....and am in love with your comment already dear...Thanks Mari i'm so humbled,do have yourself a beautiful day :-)
Williams Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 11:42 AM
Word, wow I love this and a big welcome...David
Ougo Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 2:52 AM
Aww David..thank you sir..i'm much humbled..i feel like family each and every day..poetry soup is such an awesome family thank you..and do have a good day :-)
Spase Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 9:30 AM
love takes on demands too, yep. good view.
Ougo Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 2:50 AM
Thank you Jenny...love is such a beautiful thing...a blessed thing :-)...lovely day dear :-)
Gasun Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 8:19 AM
A great and passionate write you've penned my dear friend, WC! I enjoyed reading it tonight. Thank you so much for your precious time stopping by leaving a wonderful comment on one of my poems. Happy Valentines Day! hugs, Leonora
Ougo Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 2:48 AM
Oh thank you Galinta ...you've got beautiful writes too..i learnt a lot from that piece..thank you and do have yourself a good day..hugs :-)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 6:04 AM
My dear Sir, you a very romantic poet! I loved your poem. It so true, so real, so full of human qualities!
Ougo Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 2:44 AM
Thank you Sir..your views always inspire..i promise not to dissapoint..once again thank you Sir :-)
Veetil Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 5:29 AM
A most nostalgic one for those away from home... Wonderful poem,Word Craft....
Ougo Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 5:34 AM
Oh...thank you Veetil..I wrote it in the bus yesterday evening going home...:-)
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