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I'M Breaking Up With You

I'm Breaking Up With You You captured my heart with such poetic words; a very smooth talker, thinking I was your first. That look in your photo says, "I've got something for you." I get butterflies and blush like a girl still in school. I have to break up, Linda, this is such a charade. I got so caught up I forgot..... I'm not gay!!.... Contest: Breaking up with you Sponsor: Poet Distroyer June 12, 2014

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Robert Lindley

Date: 6/22/2014 1:24:00 PM

Congrats on your great win!!!!! " I got so caught up I forgot..... I'm not gay!!...."

Arlene Smith
Date: 6/23/2014 4:27:00 AM

Thank you Robert! Always a pleasure to see your comments.. Hugs.. Arlene

Skat A

Date: 6/20/2014 5:51:00 PM

Arlene, Congratulations..... Awesome break-up poem.... Love ~SKAT~

Arlene Smith
Date: 6/20/2014 6:10:00 PM

Thanks Skat!!.. Hugs.. Arlene..

Tim Smith

Date: 6/19/2014 8:49:00 PM

Wonderful and well deserved win...hugs Tim

Arlene Smith
Date: 6/19/2014 9:06:00 PM

Thanks, Tim.. Always love to see you have stopped by.. Hugs. Arlene,,

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 6/19/2014 7:02:00 PM

Love the twist at the end, a witty and clever write. Big congrats on your win.

Arlene Smith
Date: 6/19/2014 8:26:00 PM

Thanks Cecilia!.. Hugs.. Arlene..

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/19/2014 6:10:00 PM

Love it everytime I read it, Grats on your win :)

Arlene Smith
Date: 6/19/2014 6:25:00 PM

Thanks, Casarah!.. Hugs. Arlene

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/19/2014 7:06:00 AM

Congratulations, Arlene, on a well-deserved, big win! Excellent, clever write that I thoroughly enjoyed! Warm regards.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/19/2014 6:39:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest, ARLENE

Arlene Smith
Date: 6/19/2014 8:17:00 AM

Thanks, Dr. Mehta!.. It was a fun write..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2014 12:50:00 AM

Arlene, you are such a fun poet i sense.. LOL, thanks for the smiles.... Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/13/2014 10:09:00 AM

From a very different angle you have approached the theme, love it, Arlene

Arlene Smith
Date: 6/14/2014 4:57:00 AM

Thank you so much, My friend.. It is difficult to come up with a different angle here with so many creative minds.. Hugs, Arlene..