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I'M Breaking Up With You

I'm Breaking Up With You

You captured my heart with such poetic words;
a very smooth talker, thinking I was your first.
That look in your photo says, "I've got something for you."
I get butterflies and blush like a girl still in school.
I have to break up, Linda, this is such a charade.
I got so caught up I forgot..... I'm not gay!!....



Contest: Breaking up with you
Sponsor: Poet Distroyer
June 12, 2014

Copyright © Arlene Smith | Year Posted 2014

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Robert Lindley Date: 6/22/2014 1:24:00 PM Congrats on your great win!!!!! " I got so caught up I forgot..... I'm not gay!!...." Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 6/23/2014 4:27:00 AM Thank you Robert! Always a pleasure to see your comments.. Hugs.. Arlene

Skat A Date: 6/20/2014 5:51:00 PM Arlene, Congratulations..... Awesome break-up poem.... Love ~SKAT~ Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 6/20/2014 6:10:00 PM Thanks Skat!!.. Hugs.. Arlene..

Tim Smith Date: 6/19/2014 8:49:00 PM Wonderful and well deserved win...hugs Tim Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 6/19/2014 9:06:00 PM Thanks, Tim.. Always love to see you have stopped by.. Hugs. Arlene,,

Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 6/19/2014 7:02:00 PM Love the twist at the end, a witty and clever write. Big congrats on your win. Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 6/19/2014 8:26:00 PM Thanks Cecilia!.. Hugs.. Arlene..

Casarah Nance Date: 6/19/2014 6:10:00 PM Love it everytime I read it, Grats on your win :) Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 6/19/2014 6:25:00 PM Thanks, Casarah!.. Hugs. Arlene

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/19/2014 7:06:00 AM Congratulations, Arlene, on a well-deserved, big win! Excellent, clever write that I thoroughly enjoyed! Warm regards. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/19/2014 6:39:00 AM Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest, ARLENE Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 6/19/2014 8:17:00 AM Thanks, Dr. Mehta!.. It was a fun write..

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/19/2014 12:50:00 AM Arlene, you are such a fun poet i sense.. LOL, thanks for the smiles.... Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/13/2014 10:09:00 AM From a very different angle you have approached the theme, love it, Arlene Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 6/14/2014 4:57:00 AM Thank you so much, My friend.. It is difficult to come up with a different angle here with so many creative minds.. Hugs, Arlene..

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/12/2014 10:05:00 PM Weeee cute little poem with a witty ending..:D! GBU Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 6/12/2014 11:22:00 PM Tank you, Olive for the nice comment.. Hugs.. Arlene..

Casarah Nance Date: 6/12/2014 8:03:00 PM Silly, and fun. Great break up poem Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 6/12/2014 9:35:00 PM Thanks, Casarah. I appreciate you stopping by... I will read some of your writings soon as time permits.. Hugs.. Arlene..

Tim Smith Date: 6/12/2014 7:55:00 PM A nice take on this Arlene...good luck Tim Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 6/12/2014 9:33:00 PM Thank you Tim, my friend... Hugs.. Arlene

Tim Ryerson Date: 6/12/2014 5:55:00 PM You captured MY heart with this gem Arlene!...SO glad you're not gay either...Good luck in the contest - Tim Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 6/12/2014 9:32:00 PM Thank you for the sweet comment and for stopping by, Tim........ Arlene..

Jadazzle United Date: 6/12/2014 4:47:00 PM LOL love it good luck in the contest. hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 6/12/2014 9:26:00 PM Thank you, Jadazzle.. Happy to make you smile!...hugs.. Arlene..