Arlene Smith Poet Rhyme

I'M Breaking Up With You

I'm Breaking Up With You

You captured my heart with such poetic words;
a very smooth talker, thinking I was your first.
That look in your photo says, "I've got something for you."
I get butterflies and blush like a girl still in school.
I have to break up, Linda, this is such a charade.
I got so caught up I forgot..... I'm not gay!!....



Contest: Breaking up with you
Sponsor: Poet Distroyer
June 12, 2014

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Robert Lindley June 22, 2014 at 1:24 PM Congrats on your great win!!!!! " I got so caught up I forgot..... I'm not gay!!...." Arlene Smith June 23, 2014 at 4:27 AM Thank you Robert! Always a pleasure to see your comments.. Hugs.. Arlene

Skat A June 20, 2014 at 5:51 PM Arlene, Congratulations..... Awesome break-up poem.... Love ~SKAT~ Arlene Smith June 20, 2014 at 6:10 PM Thanks Skat!!.. Hugs.. Arlene..

Tim Smith June 19, 2014 at 8:49 PM Wonderful and well deserved win...hugs Tim Arlene Smith June 19, 2014 at 9:06 PM Thanks, Tim.. Always love to see you have stopped by.. Hugs. Arlene,,

Cecilia Macfarlane June 19, 2014 at 7:02 PM Love the twist at the end, a witty and clever write. Big congrats on your win. Arlene Smith June 19, 2014 at 8:26 PM Thanks Cecilia!.. Hugs.. Arlene..

Casarah Nance June 19, 2014 at 6:10 PM Love it everytime I read it, Grats on your win :) Arlene Smith June 19, 2014 at 6:25 PM Thanks, Casarah!.. Hugs. Arlene

Pandita Sietesantos June 19, 2014 at 7:06 AM Congratulations, Arlene, on a well-deserved, big win! Excellent, clever write that I thoroughly enjoyed! Warm regards.

Dr.Ram Mehta June 19, 2014 at 6:39 AM Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest, ARLENE Arlene Smith June 19, 2014 at 8:17 AM Thanks, Dr. Mehta!.. It was a fun write..

Poet Destroyer A June 19, 2014 at 12:50 AM Arlene, you are such a fun poet i sense.. LOL, thanks for the smiles.... Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA

Dr.Ram Mehta June 13, 2014 at 10:09 AM From a very different angle you have approached the theme, love it, Arlene Arlene Smith June 14, 2014 at 4:57 AM Thank you so much, My friend.. It is difficult to come up with a different angle here with so many creative minds.. Hugs, Arlene..

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 12, 2014 at 10:05 PM Weeee cute little poem with a witty ending..:D! GBU Arlene Smith June 12, 2014 at 11:22 PM Tank you, Olive for the nice comment.. Hugs.. Arlene..

Casarah Nance June 12, 2014 at 8:03 PM Silly, and fun. Great break up poem Arlene Smith June 12, 2014 at 9:35 PM Thanks, Casarah. I appreciate you stopping by... I will read some of your writings soon as time permits.. Hugs.. Arlene..

Tim Smith June 12, 2014 at 7:55 PM A nice take on this Arlene...good luck Tim Arlene Smith June 12, 2014 at 9:33 PM Thank you Tim, my friend... Hugs.. Arlene

Tim Ryerson June 12, 2014 at 5:55 PM You captured MY heart with this gem Arlene!...SO glad you're not gay either...Good luck in the contest - Tim Arlene Smith June 12, 2014 at 9:32 PM Thank you for the sweet comment and for stopping by, Tim........ Arlene..

Jadazzle United June 12, 2014 at 4:47 PM LOL love it good luck in the contest. hugs Jan xx Arlene Smith June 12, 2014 at 9:26 PM Thank you, Jadazzle.. Happy to make you smile!...hugs.. Arlene..