Teddy Kimathi Poet Free verse

I'M Breaking Up With You

Wow!!! The last time I saw you, you were not that beautiful;
hair flowing to your shoulders like a waterfall
vanishing in mid-air; a body worth building a temple for;
and lips as sweet as those of an angel.....

Remember how you left me in hell; a wasted man
who has been treated like a child and dog simultaneously;
you were so cold to me that my love for you froze.

I am looking for a heart as warm as the noon Sun,
to free my heart from your cold; I'm breaking up with you!!!!

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Poet Destroyer A July 23, 2014 at 5:13 PM Hola, once again..>PD Teddy Kimathi July 24, 2014 at 1:18 AM Welcome on board, ma'am!! ^_^ <3

Poet Destroyer A July 17, 2014 at 6:25 PM Oh my Gosh, how many times did I stop by yesterday.. PD Teddy Kimathi July 18, 2014 at 8:07 AM Your visits are so sweet that I have stopped counting them................... ^_^

Poet Destroyer A July 14, 2014 at 10:41 PM :)...PD Teddy Kimathi July 17, 2014 at 3:28 AM ^_^ *************

Poet Destroyer A June 24, 2014 at 9:05 PM Hello Teddy, glad you are well..Linda Teddy Kimathi June 25, 2014 at 1:24 AM Hello too, Linda. I am well...... What about you?

Poet Destroyer A June 21, 2014 at 9:39 PM How are you Teddy, :) Teddy Kimathi June 23, 2014 at 12:45 AM Good morning Linda! ^_^ I'm doing good!

Poet Destroyer A June 20, 2014 at 11:48 PM thank you for the comment on my comment...Linda Teddy Kimathi June 21, 2014 at 2:55 AM Welcome, Linda. Anytime. Love, Teddy. <3 <3 <3

Skat A June 20, 2014 at 5:52 PM Teddy, Congratulations..... Awesome break-up poem.... Love ~SKAT~ Teddy Kimathi June 21, 2014 at 2:53 AM Lol. It was poetic. Thanks for your applause Skat!! ^_^

Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 20, 2014 at 12:02 AM Fabulous write Teddy really worthy of great win ! Big congrats ! Teddy Kimathi June 20, 2014 at 1:45 AM I really appreciate your applause Dr. Upma! ^_^

Tim Smith June 19, 2014 at 10:37 PM Wonderful breakup Teddy...congrats Teddy Kimathi June 20, 2014 at 1:43 AM Thanks Tim; Lol : D

Cecilia Macfarlane June 19, 2014 at 6:50 PM A cruel fate... frozen in hell, lol, Big congrats on a terrific write and win! Teddy Kimathi June 23, 2014 at 1:15 AM Please don't................we just met. Lol !!!!! : D Cecilia Macfarlane June 20, 2014 at 8:31 AM You called me by the wrong name, now have to break up with you as well! Teddy Kimathi June 20, 2014 at 1:39 AM Thanks Casarah! "You're cold-hearted" statement put to reality, LOLEST!!!!!

Casarah Nance June 19, 2014 at 6:34 PM Grats on your win, what a great break up ;) Teddy Kimathi June 20, 2014 at 1:37 AM LOL......... Thanks Casarah! ^_^

Poet Destroyer A June 19, 2014 at 2:19 PM LOL, yes I have a fun sense of humor...Linda Teddy Kimathi June 20, 2014 at 1:33 AM : D

Pandita Sietesantos June 19, 2014 at 7:09 AM Congratulations, Teddy, on a well-deserved, big win! Excellent, clever write that I thoroughly enjoyed! Warm regards. Teddy Kimathi June 19, 2014 at 10:43 AM Thank you very much for your kind observation and applause on my piece, Pandita!

Dr.Ram Mehta June 19, 2014 at 6:41 AM Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest, teddy Teddy Kimathi June 19, 2014 at 10:55 AM Thanks Dr. Ram! ^_^

Poet Destroyer A June 19, 2014 at 12:53 AM Hi Teddy, weeee, thank you for the warm break-up.. Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA Teddy Kimathi June 19, 2014 at 10:46 AM LOLEST!!!!! ".........thank you for the warm break-up". You have a good sense of humor Linda! Well, than you for your applause and constant support!!!! Love, Teddy. <3 <3 <3

Dr.Ram Mehta June 12, 2014 at 1:27 AM Sad rhyme and reason for a break up, Teddy Teddy Kimathi June 12, 2014 at 4:37 AM Really sad.....