I'm Better Than Her By Default

She was pretty, but did she have a personality?
She was a sweetie, but can she even write poetry?
She was yours, but she wasn't as honest and as real as me.
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November 23, 2025 at 6:20 PM
Hello, I think this is persuasive, you'd be a good lawyer, I do have one thing to add besides that though, perhaps "she" cannot write poetry too well, but great job capitalizing on that, if this was a chess match, you'd be ahead most decidedly.
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