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I'M Back

Went on a trip with the kids to New York For a month had lots of fun Got second and third opinions on my vision But yet there still is nothing that can be done I felt like giving up I just wanted to run Now I'm determined to fight the struggle has just begun I felt so sad that I fell in a deep depression Now I'm pointing myself in a whole new direction In New York we went to the parks the beaches and the pool Even the 16 hour ride on the amtrack was pretty cool Out of everything I've been through one thing remains true I would be a fool if I ever leave my family at poetry soup I'm trying to pull myself together and get my life on track But I just wanted you all to know Faleshia Murphy IS BACK I love you all and I will be reading your poems And posting every weekend that's all I can do for now I have to take it slow but I will always be here.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/18/2010 12:40:00 AM
haven't been on in a while myself Faleshia, moved from Kentucky to Florida in a matter of being in Kentucky for only 4 1/2 months before coming here to Florida. Now Im back as well trying to write more poems. I can only do so much myself with trying to find work and a stable place to live. But Im back as well. Missed everyone, especially you and Irma (if she's still here). Keep up the good work. Raquel a.k.a. Saphire
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Date: 8/28/2010 7:58:00 PM
Awesome come-back poem, Faleshia.Glad I read it tonight. So you have eye problems. Sorry to hear that.LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/16/2010 2:56:00 AM
Welcome Back Faleshia......We missed Ya!......Larry
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Date: 8/15/2010 11:12:00 AM
It's so nice to have you back. Glad you enjoyed your vacation. I've been thinking about taking a ride on Amtrack and I'm pleased to see you had fun riding the rails. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/15/2010 8:05:00 AM
I wish and pray for the best for you!!!! glad to see you back on the Soup...luv Michael
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