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I'M An 8

I wonder where earth joins the sky, then hear the thunder's battle cry, and ponder how the day rescinds, with words that rattle with the wind A rumbled sound from clouds tinged gray, as treetops tremble, bend and sway A raindrop tumbles to the ground I wander back to shelter found
____________________________________________________ Form: Sicilian Octave variation "strambotto" Path Number 8 Birth date 5/21 Written 9/18/14 For Andrea's challenge
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Hopper Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 12:11 PM
Such a beautiful flow. Painting a lovely picture. I love an angry storm!
Chakrabarty Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 9:10 AM
Carrie has it, a wonderful Ottava rima. HUGS! :-) rajat
Mehta Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 1:55 AM
Magical write with magical composed Ottava Rima, Carrie
Smith Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 6:44 PM
Love the form and the content my dear...hugs Tim
Nance Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 6:33 PM
Great rhythm, great words, great beauty. You are filled with greatness :) hugs
Staton Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 6:08 PM
I like this poem. It has a nice rhythm.
Gulley Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 6:04 PM
Oh I like this so very much, so creative and such imagery here. I enjoyed this so much Carrie, good luck in the contest... Have a Blessed weekend....Sharon G.
Allison Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 5:39 PM
simply stunning with wonderful imagery Carrie. Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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