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I wonder where earth joins the sky, then hear the thunder's battle cry, and ponder how the day rescinds, with words that rattle with the wind A rumbled sound from clouds tinged gray, as treetops tremble, bend and sway A raindrop tumbles to the ground I wander back to shelter found
____________________________________________________ Form: Sicilian Octave variation "strambotto" Path Number 8 Birth date 5/21 Written 9/18/14 For Andrea's challenge

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Date: 8/6/2019 12:11:00 PM
Such a beautiful flow. Painting a lovely picture. I love an angry storm!
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Date: 10/28/2014 9:10:00 AM
Carrie has it, a wonderful Ottava rima. HUGS! :-) rajat
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Date: 9/19/2014 1:55:00 AM
Magical write with magical composed Ottava Rima, Carrie
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Date: 9/18/2014 6:44:00 PM
Love the form and the content my dear...hugs Tim
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Date: 9/18/2014 6:33:00 PM
Great rhythm, great words, great beauty. You are filled with greatness :) hugs
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Date: 9/18/2014 6:08:00 PM
I like this poem. It has a nice rhythm.
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Date: 9/18/2014 6:04:00 PM
Oh I like this so very much, so creative and such imagery here. I enjoyed this so much Carrie, good luck in the contest... Have a Blessed weekend....Sharon G.
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Date: 9/18/2014 5:39:00 PM
simply stunning with wonderful imagery Carrie. Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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