I'M An 8
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I wonder where earth joins the sky,
then hear the thunder's battle cry,
and ponder how the day rescinds,
with words that rattle with the wind
A rumbled sound from clouds tinged gray,
as treetops tremble, bend and sway
A raindrop tumbles to the ground
I wander back to shelter found
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Form: Sicilian Octave variation "strambotto"
Path Number 8
Birth date 5/21
Written 9/18/14 For Andrea's challenge
Copyright © Carrie Richards | Year Posted 2014
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