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originally written in 2017 but never posted although I did post a variation under a different title
 

And now I’ve alive Thump Thump Thump I’m alive And it’s amazing Thump Thump Thump It’s warm It’s soft I’m surrounded by love And it goes Thump Thump Thump I drift... I listen and sleep Day after day I hear Thump Thump Thump It’s the sound of being loved It’s the sound of happiness Thump Thump Thump It’s like a drum Beating to the rhythm Of my growth It’s telling a story in code Thump Thump Thump Day after day I drift… I listen and sleep As I grow stronger Thump Thump Thump It’s my link to the Creator It’s the chant of angels It’s a prayer and a promise Thump Thump Thump It’s time Something is happening It’s cold and bright I gasp for my first breath Then I hear silence And more silence I don’t understand Then I feel warmth again And there it is Finally I hear it That familiar Thump Thump Thump Thump Thump Thump I am whole again Against my mother’s breast Thump Thump Thump AP: 3rd place 2020 Posted on April 8, 2020

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Date: 4/23/2020 4:21:00 PM
Aww! Can I call you 'Thumper' now?! So sweet, Line. :) Gershon
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Date: 4/23/2020 6:12:00 PM
You can ~ but I might not answer. LOL
Date: 4/10/2020 9:07:00 PM
so well written my heart is still going thump thump thump after reading it
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Date: 4/10/2020 10:10:00 PM
LOL - very funny, Timothy.
Date: 4/10/2020 3:18:00 AM
This is so beautiful and very emotional Line, for the birth of a child is the most precious moment and you have really captured that moment - thank you... With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 4/10/2020 6:40:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment, Ann. Much appreciated.
Date: 4/8/2020 2:02:00 PM
The beginning of consciousness in this realm! If only we could truly remember, You poem makes me feel like I do! I really enjoyed. Stay safe Line xxoo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/9/2020 12:15:00 AM
Thank you, Mike. Much appreciated.
Date: 4/8/2020 12:50:00 PM
Ah. A simpler time indeed. It seems a cruel trick of nature to take us from such a glorious existence in the womb only to be thrust into the tribulations of our earthly existence. Can we co back? Wonderful poem my friend. Have a great day.
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Date: 4/9/2020 12:15:00 AM
Maybe the afterlife is even better. Thanks, David.

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