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I'M a Survivor

Our family heartbroken when my father died Looking back don't know how we survived Must be an invisible hand that was our guide Staying with strangers I swallowed my pride Living at mercy of those who could provide Looking back don't know how we survived Dreaming of college quite starry eyed Yearning to succeed as my mother advised Living at mercy of those who could provide A long time our family collectively cried The essence of survival took us on a ride Yearning to succeed as my mother advised Endurance won over putting hurdles aside Took years but we made it to the other side The essence of survival took us on a ride Don't wish on anyone such unwanted slide Our family heartbroken when my father died Took years but we made it to the other side Must be an invisible hand that was our guide August 28, 2017 Placed 2nd: I'm a Survivor Sponsor: Julie Rodeheaver

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Date: 10/16/2022 7:28:00 PM
A very touching narration. When your father- the bread winner of the family died, I can imagine the sudden twist of fate you had to endure. But with dogged determination you defeated fate and have come back to life as a victorious survivor. Great theme and great presentation, Vijay
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Date: 8/30/2017 7:57:00 AM
Congrats Vijay, for your placement with this brilliant piece!! ;-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/31/2017 7:34:00 AM
Thank you Teddy--love your feedback!
Date: 8/30/2017 12:21:00 AM
Wonderful success story, my friend, and a courageous life ... blessings and congrats on your well-deserved win! :-)
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Date: 8/29/2017 10:47:00 PM
Congratulations, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/30/2017 4:57:00 AM
Thanks Subimal!
Date: 8/29/2017 9:00:00 PM
Congratulations Vijay! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/29/2017 9:22:00 PM
Thanks Heidi.. congrats to you as well!
Date: 8/29/2017 7:32:00 PM
congratulations on your win!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/29/2017 8:58:00 PM
Thanks Karen..and congrats to you as well!
Date: 8/29/2017 3:06:00 AM
- A wonderful poem with a lot of emotion, Vijay - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/29/2017 5:13:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise!
Date: 8/28/2017 6:03:00 PM
You did a GREAT job with this difficult form, Vijay and I am happy you made it to the "other side!"
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2017 6:29:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 8/28/2017 3:54:00 PM
Wonderfully expressed, my friend!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2017 4:01:00 PM
Thanks Kim!
Date: 8/28/2017 3:10:00 PM
you prevailed amidst the turmoils of life, vijay!...wonderfully expressed...huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2017 3:35:00 PM
Thanks, nette!
Date: 8/28/2017 3:09:00 PM
you prevailed amidst the turmoils of life, vijay!...wonderfully expressed...huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2017 3:35:00 PM
Thanks, nette!
Date: 8/28/2017 11:10:00 AM
Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2017 11:31:00 AM
Thanks Dale!
Date: 8/28/2017 10:53:00 AM
A very emotional Terzanelle my friend...your emotions flowed through...god bless...^WW^
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2017 11:05:00 AM
Thanks WW!
Date: 8/28/2017 9:15:00 AM
That had to be extremely difficult Vijay. You feelings were transmitted beautifully.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2017 10:30:00 AM
Thanks Tim--yes very much so!!
Date: 8/28/2017 7:05:00 AM
Vijay, I just love this poem. What a well written Terzanelle! I can really relate to this too and will save it as a favorite. You certainly are a strong survivor :) I do know about the invisible guide and human angels too from what I have been through. Take care.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2017 7:10:00 AM
Love your comments and such wonderful heartfelt sentiments, Heidi!

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