I'M a Survivor

I never thought that I would be free
Yes, free from negativity
I never thought that I  would be a meteor
And crash from the dead galaxy
Of mistrust, disgust, rejection
Of lies, deceit, greed, and torment
I never thought that I could survive
Without the malicious you in my life
Without anger, pain, self-hate and strife
All of the sharp objects that I was born into
And severely cut and bruised me 
Are falling like missiles with motion
Of projectiles: 
Poverty, racism, lackadaisical teaching.

I’m surviving finally free from
Not thinking that I was wonderfully made
Because I didn’t have the same star quality
As someone else.
Not ever feeling true love
Because I was seeking it in the wrong region of space
Dealing with corrupted minds of aliens
From asteroids of arrogance and angst.

I never thought I would fall into the heavens 
Of positivity
I never thought that I would take off my goggles
And say that I survived the mission
I never thought I would be on board
Traveling many light years as the captivated cadet
Of hostility
Nasty nebula was mission control.

I say it now I’m on a new mission
As a prosperous captain
Of confidence
It may pull me down 
Stronger than gravity’s force sometimes
But I have a made up mind
I’m standing firmly with an upside down frown
Mighty motivation is mission control.


I say it now and I say it bold
To all of lavish aliens living 
In the galaxy of lustful lies
I know that I will survive
To all that jolt around in the Jupiter of jealousy
I’m going to hop in on the Halley’s Comet of hatred
Happily
I’m a survivor and I will travel many more light years
Happier.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freakasso Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 2:50 AM
Thank U for your nice comment! I really liked the thought process in this poem.It says soooo much!God bless, Prince
Fraser Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 12:13 PM
I have to agree with Anthony and Jared, an excellent write Nicole>>James
Pickett Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 12:02 PM
Keep traveling, and I will be right there with you along your journey through your words.....EXCELLENT write Nicole.....
Nutter Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 12:02 PM
Another excellent write to join your others. Nice job.
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