Notes About The Poem

Written, April 4, 2026
For The Contest, “Stars Or Home”
Sponsor, Ink Empress - 3rd Place

July 7, 2026, Entered In The Premiere Contest, "Best 2026 Poem." Sponsor, Sotto Poet

 

I'm A Forgotten Home

There was a time when I felt loved and blessed
and shared the joys of family within.
With simple comforts, I provided them
a shelter, warmth, a place to live and grow.

My windows, sparkling clean, would bring a smile.
The porch and steps were swept of all debris.
Indoors, the cooking smells enforced for me
sweet happiness flowed well inside my walls.

But now the years claimed their sad toll at last.
More modern homes are sought in these new times.
My creaking boards and drafty window frames
have told them I am tired and need to go.

Oh, life was sweet, but prime times do decline.
I miss the things that filled my needy shell.
The sounds heard now are stormy winds and rain.
My vision's dimmed by windows caked with mud.

Perhaps I'll live through those photos they took
as they may reminisce in later years.
For now, I stand until the wrecking crew
turns me to splinters from the home they knew.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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April 17, 2026 at 9:22 AM
A very deeply moving poem, sad, and made me feel so very much, how it feels to be in such a place, state of mind and life. Thank you for sharing Congratulations Sending you light always
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April 12, 2026 at 12:43 AM
Wow, Sandra, I really like this poem. And it is truly a well composed blank verse. I like the sentiment here, too. It is a fav+ for me. Moon Harp
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