Illusory Vision
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Line Gauthier's Bite Size No. 70 Contest ~ August 24, 2023

In an illusory vision, I perceive the moon
High aloft the world in midnight's pitch,
polished to a satiny sheen; burnished pearl,
a solitaire gem mounted in celestial skies
surrounded by multi-faceted diamonds,
myriads of gleaming stars before my eyes.
Copyright © Lin Lane | Year Posted 2023
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