Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Other

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04.11.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Illusku: Illustrated Haiku Challenge 3 Poetry Sponsored by: JCB Brul

1st place in the contest

- Illusku - 3 -

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                                        )))        flashing in the dark
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                                )))                 when the devil rolls marbles -   @@ ))
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                                     @@ ...  @@@             roused the brass trumpets
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Andrea Dietrich December 9, 2025 at 11:28 AM Great imagery. Congrats

JC Brul December 8, 2025 at 9:47 PM Sleek and beautiful! Congratulations Anne Lise ^___^ JCB

Paula Goldsmith December 8, 2025 at 11:59 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun ~ write/shape again. I love your picture. Hope you are feeling better. Take Care with Hugs... Have a blessed day with your win..........

Paula Goldsmith November 5, 2025 at 1:32 PM WOW!!! What a picture, write and shapes. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Hope You Have Autumn Blessings As You Write Away............

I Am Anaya November 5, 2025 at 11:12 AM Waves swooshing, biblical! Thor the God of Thunder comes to mind as does Gabriel. Awesome~ xXHugs

Jay Narain November 5, 2025 at 10:29 AM Beautiful picture and your poem.

Upasana Banerjee November 5, 2025 at 9:10 AM I adore this! Thanks for sharing this, Anne-Lise :)

Joseph P. DiMino November 5, 2025 at 6:44 AM Fishing in the dark...love that! Great imagery! Anne-Lise Andresen November 5, 2025 at 6:50 AM - flashing ... in the dark, Joe :) - (lightning and thunder)

William Kelii Kekaula November 5, 2025 at 6:37 AM Nicely crafted, I enjoyed your sentiments, marbles, an incredible delight, Aloha, William.

Heidi Sands November 5, 2025 at 5:35 AM Wow! Great one Anne-Lise. :)

Sara Kendrick November 5, 2025 at 4:33 AM Good one. The accompanying picture is wonderful. I love the color. Sara K

Connie Pachecho November 5, 2025 at 1:03 AM Anne, your poetry lights the skies. (((<> . . <>)))

Arthur Vaso November 4, 2025 at 11:54 PM Wow loved this one Anne-Lise

Howard Kerr November 4, 2025 at 10:01 PM Sorry, Anne-Lise, I confused this fine work with an earlier entry. Marvellous imagery and illustration. Immaculate symbolism to the fore Howard

Victor Buhagiar November 4, 2025 at 9:47 PM Perfect imagery. Loved your poem. Hugs.

sara Etgen-Baker November 4, 2025 at 6:16 PM nicely done! hugs from Texas, Sara

Yann Rolland November 4, 2025 at 3:12 PM very creative and nice, great inspiration for me, thanks poet anne lise