Illusku

He chose to see through her     
                *eyes*               
    ---------        ---------
     ‘•((@))              ((@))•’
         ~        |  |       ~
                   |  |
                 (_  _)
And the 
                 world   
                                      *  *
      /\            /\           *          *         _______
    /    \        /    \       *     |  |      *    /________\
  /        \    /        \      * ~ |  |~  *         |<> <>|
/            \/            \_____|  |________|    |. |   |______

looked like a 
               •~~~~~~~~~~•
     ~ *>•.  b e a u t i f u l .•<*~
               . ~~~~~~~~~~.  
place
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Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 11:31 AM
Gosh this has to be one of my favorites both for the ku itself and the pictures. Congrats
George Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 1:02 AM
Fantastic illustration! Lovely haiku too....
Banerjee Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 10:19 PM
Thank you, Valsa! Hugs :)
Kendrick Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 7:44 AM
Ahh!! Reads like a good contender if for a contest. I am sure it took a great effort to do this one. Sara K
Banerjee Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 10:19 PM
Thank you Sara! Hugs :)
Andresen Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 3:24 AM
- Skillfully written and shaped ... a winning poem in my eyes ... good luck, Upasana :) - hugs
Banerjee Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 10:19 PM
Means a lot, Anne-Lise! Hugs :)
Anaya Avatar
November 8, 2025 at 11:01 AM
This is really creative Upasana, uplifted my spirit. Ty for sharing~GL!
Banerjee Avatar
November 8, 2025 at 7:44 PM
I'm glad to hear that! Thank you for lovely words, Anaya. May God bless you :)
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