Illusion


invention of my rich
imagination; false
impression I embraced
imitation of truth
I believed completely
impactful delusion  
impressed upon my mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Koplin Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 2:52 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away....................
Seeker Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 8:15 PM
A unique write! Absolutely enjoyed every word, congrats on your win, Janice
Canerdy Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 5:37 AM
Unseeking Seeker, thank you so much for sponsoring and for my win! Janice
Dietrich Avatar
May 16, 2022 at 10:52 AM
I like how it started out one type of poem and took on a life of its own. Awesome job with the theme.
Canerdy Avatar
May 18, 2022 at 1:24 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! Janice
Leffanta Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 11:26 AM
Thoughts are things; bubbles burst! Enjoyed! Aloha!
Canerdy Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 12:17 PM
Indeed, they do. Thanks, Rico. Janice
Rhymer Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 7:52 AM
Your poem was as salt in a newly closed wound,yet healing none the less..Hope this is something you heard about and not something you lived.Enjoyed the line impressed upon the mind especially as that is truly the case whether by love starved self delusion or the calculations of another.So enjoyed,ouch,really did.
Canerdy Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 12:18 PM
Vickey, thank you so much for this message. Janice
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