Illumined Path

Night donned sparkle of moonbeam, 
drizzled from sky when it gleamed
on the cascade of stardust,
draping my wasteland dreams flushed.

Lost in desert with no glare,
I saw in you the pole star,
took me to your aurora,
sank in longing patina.

Like the sky your silk face blushed
in my dream hued by sunburst,
missed path to you illumined
in new dawn’s enticing light.

June 25, 2020
Syllable count : 7 each line
Checked on howmanysyllables.com
Contest : all Yours (Mar 26)
Sponsor : Brian Strand
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Mitra Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 6:33 PM
Nicely done Subimal.....Congrats on your win my friend...Take Care :))
Kauffman Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 12:15 PM
Sublimal, you have such a gift for imagery that expresses the theme of your poems. This poem is no exception! Congratulations on your winning placement!
Somadas Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 1:30 AM
Like the sky your silk face blushed.. Beautifully penned.. Congratulation on your win Subimal..
Faulkner Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 8:56 PM
'new dawn's enticing light' - so lyrical, congratulations on your win!
Canerdy Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 8:42 PM
CONGRATS on your win, Subimal. Janice
Bangalee Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 2:28 AM
super imaginative the illuminated path..... enjoyable
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