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Illumined Path

Night donned sparkle of moonbeam, drizzled from sky when it gleamed on the cascade of stardust, draping my wasteland dreams flushed. Lost in desert with no glare, I saw in you the pole star, took me to your aurora, sank in longing patina. Like the sky your silk face blushed in my dream hued by sunburst, missed path to you illumined in new dawn’s enticing light. June 25, 2020 Syllable count : 7 each line Checked on howmanysyllables.com Contest : all Yours (Mar 26) Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Date: 3/26/2021 6:33:00 PM
Nicely done Subimal.....Congrats on your win my friend...Take Care :))
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Date: 6/24/2020 12:15:00 PM
Sublimal, you have such a gift for imagery that expresses the theme of your poems. This poem is no exception! Congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 6/24/2020 1:30:00 AM
Like the sky your silk face blushed.. Beautifully penned.. Congratulation on your win Subimal..
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Date: 6/23/2020 8:56:00 PM
'new dawn's enticing light' - so lyrical, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/23/2020 8:42:00 PM
CONGRATS on your win, Subimal. Janice
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Date: 6/15/2020 2:28:00 AM
super imaginative the illuminated path..... enjoyable
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