Illumination - TRI

Your music never fails to make
the stars go dancing in the dark.
The moon observes them wide awake,
and floods of light stream down the park.

The stars go dancing in the dark
and paint the sky in silver dyes
to sparkle and to mesmerize.

The moon observes them wide awake.
Then lightens up as if amused
to see celestials diffused.

And floods of light stream down the park.
It's time for my heart to rejoice;
it is the music of your voice.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Callus Avatar
September 5, 2024 at 1:59 PM
This is lovely with a blending of imagery and personification, Zainab, and the meter is quite good. Congrats on your top win. Regards // paul
Croft Avatar
September 5, 2024 at 12:30 PM
Congratulations on your win for this amazing poem.
Woods Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 8:37 AM
Oh very nice form! Congratulations on your top win! Xo
Canerdy Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 7:46 PM
Zainab, a huge CONGRATS on your first-place win in my contest. Such a descriptive, lovely poem! Janice
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