Illogical Prayer

That day, the sky delineates the beauty of a golden dusk,
The dusk which shed the azure of a day,
The dusk which seduce the earth to picked up her shadow upon the moonlit,

To the dear night she sang,
Chanted about the grief of a daylight,
Wrapped neat the anxiousness within the side of a jaded soul,
Shush the wishsong when the world began to burke,

That day, in the hubbub sense tucked a prayer,
A prayer with all improbabilities of a reality,
A prayer with all of the naivete,
Is the prayer in her desire to have a pair of impossibilities,

A pair of wings,

A human being who literally could not set down the sky with her bare feet,
A gifted creature with the remarkably things around her yet full of limitations,
A naive prayer but able to bring tiny grin on that day,
That day, that single beauty returned to her essence as a needy creature who craved for the existence of the almighty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 11/28/2012 4:13:00 PM
I hope this craving is satisfied, yes he does exist and prayer is the logical means to connect with him. This is truly trancendant piece of work. I very much enjoyed the feelings and innocence that you framed with your words. You truly do have a poetic heart.
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Date: 11/21/2012 6:34:00 AM
Interesting lines penned..Sara
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/21/2012 6:54:00 AM
Thank you Sara :), and glad that you visit :) - hug, yanny
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