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Illicit Temptations

When my eyes stop at a ring on your finger I wonder why this feeling even stronger I know for sure you're taken Though my heart's not broken, you've caught me in your prison Look at those eyes, intensely stroking my heart And those lips, offering heating kiss The closer you are, I smile a nectar You say your name, only your sexy voice I can hear I gaze your face, your neck is on my trace You invite yourself to my place I definitely shall be whipped, if I tried to resist Then all of a sudden, your ring touches my cheek It is cold and rings my conscience As alluring your illicit temptations are I'd never scratch other woman's heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/17/2013 11:17:00 AM
ohhh, enjoyed the kind of restraint this piece pulls off, dinda... just fascinating, wonderful write!..:) huggs
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Date: 9/22/2013 3:31:00 PM
loved this write with a great ending
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Date: 9/18/2013 4:53:00 PM
I just love how you cooled the passion and thought about the "other woman" at the end. VEry commendable and made for a great message.
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Date: 9/5/2013 2:34:00 AM
- .... feelings, but be careful .. - A well written poem Dinda - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Milton Manyass
Date: 11/25/2013 6:42:00 AM
oh, how sometimes we get tempted to touch what does not belong to us. certainly this is human, but your poem rings out a message: restrain! good piece of work,Dinda.

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