Ill Wind

Ill Wind
Ill westerly winds were blowing today
Carrying the past to my open door
And moving old dreams that got in it's way
Blowing swept ashes around on the floor
Hints of sweet aromas filling the air
Swirling boldly with a sharp biting chill
Reminding my heart that love is not fair
Teasing and testing the mind of it's will
It's proclivity for leaving messes
Rearranging the dust on old photos
Going through boxes from old addresses
A front row seat to a rerun floor show
Why can't I learn to keep the front door closed
One never knows when the west wind will blow


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       On Second Thought
Unannounced, she walked right in the front door
Cool westerly winds blowing the past in
Stirring spent ashes and heartache again
And memories of once tender rapport
Familiar aromas, the scent of yore
At first, it seemed a chill was to begin
After a few barbs we talked like old friends
Going through some boxes she'd left before
Bitterness still lives in both of our hearts
Harsh words and actions remain fresh and raw
We both concluded that kindness was best
It was obvious we had grown apart
Once gone, I sat in silence and recalled
The first time we met and how she impressed



 
    July 2 2016    by Daniel Turner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 3/19/2018 12:17:00 AM
such a nice sonnet, Daniel, you make it so easy.. enjoyed reading
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Date: 7/6/2016 7:26:00 AM
Greetings Daniel. Congrats for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/6/2016 2:34:00 PM
Thank you Teddy. I appreciate the flowers. I also appreciate your time and constant support.
Date: 7/5/2016 3:36:00 PM
This is wonderful Daniel. I love how the wind stirred up a peek at your world! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/5/2016 3:46:00 PM
Thank you Mrs Carrie. I appreciate the kind remarks. My world is a confusing place, at times I have to stop and think if I'm contributing to the good or the bad. lol
Date: 7/5/2016 12:06:00 PM
:) It's a pleasure reading such imagination on this site. I love to read the poems on contest and other poet not on contest, too. keep up the good work! :)
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Date: 7/5/2016 11:38:00 AM
Touching,,,I like the way you present it. Congrats :)
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Date: 7/5/2016 12:00:00 PM
Sunita, you are so kind. I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave such friendly comments.
Date: 7/5/2016 7:56:00 AM
So sadly heartfelt but such beautifully and skillfully written Sonnets, Daniel. Congratulations on your fine placement on the limited winner's list in this contest. 7 Sandra
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Date: 7/5/2016 11:59:00 AM
Thank you Mrs Sandra. I appreciate your graciousness and consideration. It's always a pleasure when you visit.
Date: 7/4/2016 10:12:00 PM
Daniel, your poem came in 9th place in my contest. I don't know why the results came out the way they did... Happy 4th and Congratulations... check out my blog if you like. LINDA
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Date: 7/5/2016 6:52:00 AM
Thank you Linda. i appreciate your consideration and for letting me play along. I've gotten so many NA's lately I am pleased just to place.
Date: 7/4/2016 9:42:00 PM
Two really good writes DT. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 3/30/2016 12:36:00 PM
Greetings Daniel. Congrats for your awesome first placement with this amazing verse!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/30/2016 12:50:00 PM
Thank you Teddy for your kind friendly visits. I really appreciate your support and friendship. Peace my friend:)
Date: 3/30/2016 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations Daniel on your breathtaking win! You are truly a matchless poet! :) -HANS
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Date: 3/30/2016 9:36:00 AM
Thank you, Hans. You're too kind. I appreciate your time and your friendship. Peace my friend:)
Date: 3/30/2016 6:56:00 AM
Great and most deserving win Dt
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Date: 3/30/2016 7:49:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie. I really appreciate your kindness. Peace my friend:)
Date: 3/30/2016 4:02:00 AM
They both stand alone as excellent sonnets Daniel many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/30/2016 7:45:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. I appreciate your kind comments and your friendly visits. Peace nice lady:)
Date: 3/30/2016 1:17:00 AM
Wonderful poetry n much deserved top place win Daniel.. big congrats!
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Date: 3/30/2016 7:44:00 AM
Thank you, Upma. I appreciate your kindness and friendly visits. Peace my friend:)
Date: 3/29/2016 6:59:00 PM
DT...Cong rats on your top placement!-luloo
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Date: 3/29/2016 7:01:00 PM
Thank you, Laura. I appreciate your kindness and your friendship. Peace my dear:)
Date: 3/29/2016 6:17:00 PM
Daniel, I really enjoyed the first version and the metaphoric melancholy stirred by the dust blown winds of time. The second poem I found to be full of the subtle nuances of interpersonal relationships and how they change over time. Very interesting treatment of the "theme". Thanks for taking the time to submit them to the contest.
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Date: 3/29/2016 6:54:00 PM
John, I found this exercise to be not only enlightening and fun but also helpful. I have used it over and over since participating in this contest. Thank you for the light and for considering my submission.
Date: 3/2/2016 3:20:00 PM
Great write, Daniel. Interesting contest, best of luck to you my friend.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/2/2016 3:24:00 PM
Thank you. I found it quite fun actually. For me things always look differently after I step back and clear my mind. It was different to say the least. Thank you sweet Jeannie, I always love hearing from you. Peace my dear:)
Date: 3/2/2016 8:16:00 AM
What an interesting excercise, I enjoyed both immensely.
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Date: 3/2/2016 8:21:00 AM
Thank you, Richard. It surprised me too. I thought about doing it with some other old writes and see if things look differently now. Peace my friend. Always a pleasure:)
Date: 3/1/2016 8:05:00 PM
It's hard for a heart to put a lock on a door. Good write.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/1/2016 8:07:00 PM
I'll second that! I appreciate your keen insight my friend. Thanks for reading and commenting:)
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