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Too ponderous of a weight To carry on one's shoulders Slowly metastasizing Cancer on one's soul Submitted for May Premier 8 Any 4 Or 5 Line Form,On Any Theme Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand 04/18/2019

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Date: 5/28/2019 7:28:00 PM
Indeed! You captured the essence of the destructive nature of ill will with your potent and creative pen, Edward. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/29/2019 5:59:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely comments and visit, Susan:-)
Date: 5/28/2019 5:50:00 PM
Well penned, Edward. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/29/2019 5:58:00 AM
Thank you, Line:-)
Date: 5/28/2019 5:37:00 PM
this is an awesome poem. A very well deserved win, sir. Congratulations
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/29/2019 5:57:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea:-)
Date: 5/28/2019 8:46:00 AM
An excellent write Edward, love the use of the word ponderous, congrats on a great win!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/28/2019 5:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, John:-)

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