Edward Ibeh Poet Dodoitsu

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Ill Will

Too ponderous of a weight
To carry on one's shoulders
Slowly metastasizing
Cancer on one's soul


 

Submitted for May Premier 8 Any 4 Or 5 Line Form,On Any Theme Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: Brian Strand
04/18/2019

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Susan Ashley May 28, 2019 at 7:28 PM Indeed! You captured the essence of the destructive nature of ill will with your potent and creative pen, Edward. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Edward Ibeh May 29, 2019 at 5:59 AM Thank you for the lovely comments and visit, Susan:-)

Line Gauthier May 28, 2019 at 5:50 PM Well penned, Edward. Congrats on your podium finish. Edward Ibeh May 29, 2019 at 5:58 AM Thank you, Line:-)

Andrea Dietrich May 28, 2019 at 5:37 PM this is an awesome poem. A very well deserved win, sir. Congratulations Edward Ibeh May 29, 2019 at 5:57 AM Thank you, Andrea:-)

John Hamilton May 28, 2019 at 8:46 AM An excellent write Edward, love the use of the word ponderous, congrats on a great win! Edward Ibeh May 28, 2019 at 5:00 PM Thank you so much, John:-)