I'Ll Love All of You All My Days

I have spent my days in love,
breaking through the surface of you…
laid restless with your undeniable 
essence, tasted your spontaneity, 
comforted your loneliness, quivered 
within your beating heart, breathed in
your fire…I’ve walked your path 
before your tentative feet 
marked the stones, counted your tears 
when you thought no eyes 
cried with yours, suffered the bruising
of all your pain, sheltered you 
secretly from pouring rain. I could paint
a meticulous picture of every crease
in your tender smile and listen to your laughter
like a favorite love song for all my days.
I could spend every moment with you
and forever discover a nuance to love,
for I love you with all I am…   
and if one day I grow old and lose a piece
of who I once was, as memories 
become fleeting and my earthly days 
become digits on my hand, 
I will hold onto this…
(not a thought but a feeling)
I will know in my heart, the stepping stones 
your feet have marked, and I will follow you 
into eternal light of love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/9/2015 2:07:00 PM
A powerful love that brings hope and meaning . . . nicely done! 7
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Date: 5/7/2015 3:33:00 PM
Off-topic - When are you going to judge the Florida contest? It is getting rather ancient.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/8/2015 11:12:00 AM
Sorry, sweetie. I've been dealing with some health problems. It's judged, but I haven't posted it yet. I'm hoping to post the winners soon. I received some beautiful entries!
Date: 5/7/2015 2:24:00 PM
Supremely beautiful and romantic. Now this is the language of love!
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Date: 5/1/2015 11:02:00 PM
Oh to have a love like this. You are a lucky one, Rhonda. And this poem is perfection. FAVE
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Date: 5/1/2015 7:44:00 PM
Sounds like the eternal love of a mother
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Date: 5/1/2015 1:24:00 PM
This is beautiful.... To follow your love to eternal light....that is love
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