I'Ll Gladly Pay You Tuesday

I am stuffed up to my gills, Stomach sated fully filled Plates licked clean, my palate's dream- Do you mind to pay the bill? *Let me ask y'all something: would the last line be better if it read "Would you mind to foot the bill"? Someone let me know! ;)

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Robin Davis

Date: 11/22/2013 8:30:00 AM

Chan This is cute and silly. Makes me smile and chuckle. Your reply to Thom is funny because that's what I thought of when reading it. And think of my nickname from you. LOL Hugs Thanks for another awesome and heartfelt comment on my Loyalty Pledge poem.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/22/2013 8:55:00 AM

Every once in a while you'll chance upon a poem of mine that isn't all doom and gloom lol Thanks for reviewing, Sweet Pea! <3

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 9/25/2013 11:25:00 PM

Hahaha, Funny Man. I like. As are you // I'm sated too // I'll bid you bye with this here hint // afore you invite // a lass for a bite // make sure that like you she's not skint. Licia :-)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/26/2013 7:18:00 AM

I wrote this last night after a late supper, and I still think I'm full this morning lol Thanks for the creative reply, Licia ;)