I'Ll Give You the Sun

I'll give you the Sun
If you give me the Moon and the Stars
If you take the Ocean 
I call the Sky
You can have all the Creatures
that crawl beneath the earth, but
promise me the Trees
Overlook the Mountains
You can't buy the Hills, but
I'll give you all the Beast 
that soar high above
Keeping watch over all
In return I'll give you Shelter
in times of need
Protection from vicious Predators 
I'll give you the Grass
If you promise me the Soil
I'll give you the clouds
If you promise me the Rain
You are the luckiest... remember that
because if I give you the Sun
everything else falls in place
because everything revolves around 
the Sun
and I'll give you the Sun 
If you're willing to take it
I'll give you the Sun...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 11:56 AM
Hello Diamond Ledet, so nice to meet you. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I can feel the romance in this poem. Enjoy your your day my friend.
Ledet Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 12:04 PM
Thank you, you enjoy your day too! and awesome writing by the way
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