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I'Ll Give You the Sun

I'll give you the Sun If you give me the Moon and the Stars If you take the Ocean I call the Sky You can have all the Creatures that crawl beneath the earth, but promise me the Trees Overlook the Mountains You can't buy the Hills, but I'll give you all the Beast that soar high above Keeping watch over all In return I'll give you Shelter in times of need Protection from vicious Predators I'll give you the Grass If you promise me the Soil I'll give you the clouds If you promise me the Rain You are the luckiest... remember that because if I give you the Sun everything else falls in place because everything revolves around the Sun and I'll give you the Sun If you're willing to take it I'll give you the Sun...

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Date: 7/8/2020 11:56:00 AM
Hello Diamond Ledet, so nice to meet you. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I can feel the romance in this poem. Enjoy your your day my friend.
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Diamond Ledet
Date: 7/8/2020 12:04:00 PM
Thank you, you enjoy your day too! and awesome writing by the way

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