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Another Souper's Poem about rain Inspired this one!

When you’re feeling sad or lonely your heart swelling with the pain stand beside the nearest window I will come to you in the rain. When you hear the clap of thunder and bright lightning fills the lane wait for tap of raindrop patter I will come to you in the rain. Think of me in this dark prism my head hanging as in shame Feel my heart beating wildly as I come to you in the rain. When rain drops bead on glass press you lips to the windowpane I’ll be waiting, ever waiting with sweet kisses in the rain. Two hearts beating with the rhythm of the raindrops hushed refrain two hearts eager, crying, sighing forever together in the rain. Revised 7/24/2015 © cfa 7/24/2015

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J.R. Wren-Ingalls

Date: 1/10/2020 9:47:00 PM

This was beautiful! I love the return to love in the rain in each verse! Thanks for your poetry!

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 1/10/2020 12:11:00 AM

Two hearts beating with the rhythm/ of the raindrops hushed refrain/ two hearts eager, crying, sighing / forever together in the rain.//// superb and excellent poem penned; enjoyed greatly

Mama Bear

Date: 12/1/2015 9:10:00 AM

Absolutely heart felt and so lovely. Rain makes one melancholy but not this time Well done my dear. Blessings Edith

Cona Adams
Date: 12/1/2015 10:18:00 AM

Thank you, Mama Bear (love your handle) for the visit, and the generous comment. All the Best!

Ralph Sergi

Date: 10/18/2015 5:58:00 PM

You have made the rain an image of love. Great work!

Cona Adams
Date: 10/19/2015 5:47:00 AM

Thank you, Ralph. Your generous comment is much appreciated. Have a great week.

Samiha Zubair

Date: 8/21/2015 4:03:00 PM

I love the way you expressed the particular moment when it makes a person reminiscent of the memory

Cona Adams
Date: 9/2/2015 7:37:00 AM

Thank you, Samiha, for the visit, and for taking the time to comment. I'm gratified to know that you enjoyed it. All the best to you.

BE Bailey

Date: 7/22/2015 6:35:00 AM

Oh I love this one Cona. Always a pleasure to read your work. Keep writing and have yourself a wonderful day. I'll be back to read more. Love and Hugs "B"

Cona Adams
Date: 7/23/2015 8:01:00 AM

Thank you so much, B. Your visit and comment is always appreciated. You have yourself a wonderful day, too. Blessings.

Emile Pinet

Date: 7/15/2015 1:26:00 PM

The imagery is good and the reader can feel the experience, within the falling drops of rain. Emile.

Cona Adams
Date: 7/18/2015 7:01:00 AM

Thank you, Emile. Another souper's poem about rain inspired this one. Your visit and comment is appreciated.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/5/2015 9:40:00 AM

Cona, I LOVE this beautiful romantic, enchanting poem. I adore the rain and you have exalted it in your lovely poem. This is going straight into my fave's! 7

Cona Adams
Date: 7/5/2015 3:13:00 PM

Thanks so much, Connie for visiting to read. This was one of those that simply "wrote itself" as fast, as I could type the words on the page. So glad you liked it. Blessings!