Cona Adams Poet Quatrain

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Another Souper's Poem about rain Inspired this one!

I'Ll Come To You

When you’re feeling sad or lonely
your heart swelling with the pain
stand beside the nearest window
I will come to you in the rain.

When you hear the clap of thunder
and bright lightning fills the lane
wait for tap of raindrop patter 
I will come to you in the rain.

Think of me in this dark prism
my head hanging as in shame
Feel my heart beating wildly
as I come to you in the rain.

When rain drops bead on glass
press you lips to the windowpane
I’ll be waiting, ever waiting
with sweet kisses in the rain.

Two hearts beating with the rhythm
of the raindrops hushed refrain
two hearts eager, crying, sighing 
forever together in the rain.

Revised 7/24/2015
© cfa 7/24/2015

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J.R. Wren-Ingalls January 10, 2020 at 9:47 PM This was beautiful! I love the return to love in the rain in each verse! Thanks for your poetry!

Mahtab Bangalee January 10, 2020 at 12:11 AM Two hearts beating with the rhythm/ of the raindrops hushed refrain/ two hearts eager, crying, sighing / forever together in the rain.//// superb and excellent poem penned; enjoyed greatly

Mama Bear December 1, 2015 at 9:10 AM Absolutely heart felt and so lovely. Rain makes one melancholy but not this time Well done my dear. Blessings Edith Cona Adams December 1, 2015 at 10:18 AM Thank you, Mama Bear (love your handle) for the visit, and the generous comment. All the Best!

Ralph Sergi October 18, 2015 at 5:58 PM You have made the rain an image of love. Great work! Cona Adams October 19, 2015 at 5:47 AM Thank you, Ralph. Your generous comment is much appreciated. Have a great week.

Samiha Zubair August 21, 2015 at 4:03 PM I love the way you expressed the particular moment when it makes a person reminiscent of the memory Cona Adams September 2, 2015 at 7:37 AM Thank you, Samiha, for the visit, and for taking the time to comment. I'm gratified to know that you enjoyed it. All the best to you.

BE Bailey July 22, 2015 at 6:35 AM Oh I love this one Cona. Always a pleasure to read your work. Keep writing and have yourself a wonderful day. I'll be back to read more. Love and Hugs "B" Cona Adams July 23, 2015 at 8:01 AM Thank you so much, B. Your visit and comment is always appreciated. You have yourself a wonderful day, too. Blessings.

Emile Pinet July 15, 2015 at 1:26 PM The imagery is good and the reader can feel the experience, within the falling drops of rain. Emile. Cona Adams July 18, 2015 at 7:01 AM Thank you, Emile. Another souper's poem about rain inspired this one. Your visit and comment is appreciated.

Connie Marcum Wong July 5, 2015 at 9:40 AM Cona, I LOVE this beautiful romantic, enchanting poem. I adore the rain and you have exalted it in your lovely poem. This is going straight into my fave's! 7 Cona Adams July 5, 2015 at 3:13 PM Thanks so much, Connie for visiting to read. This was one of those that simply "wrote itself" as fast, as I could type the words on the page. So glad you liked it. Blessings!