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Snow over a foot deep Thrown into a big heap A pile we will make If not for the kids sake For an igloo they will undertake Through the hole I will creep Not a word I shall peep Lying here trying to sleep As I begin to shake And my back begins to ache I think it's time for a house break I'll crawl out like a sheep And it's off to the house to get some sleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 1/27/2011 8:03:00 AM
Thank you and fixed
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Date: 1/27/2011 7:30:00 AM
Simply worded, but very descriptive with some nice rhyming. In the tenth line, "begin" should be "begins". Everything else looks fine.
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