If You Were Mine
its how it feels when you loom
I always get a tingle down my spine
Perhaps the smell of your perfume
That is what puts me on cloud nine
When everything is doom and gloom
You seem to make everything shine
just like a flower you too bloom
And one that is all so sublime
You make my heart go boom!
Its how it feels every time
And you are the one of whom
I write these words so divine
This was actually published in a book called between the lines
But changed a few lines and the title originally called sublime
I thought poem suits you as you are sublime
Also expressing again how you make me feel
Love always davidxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Written by David Scott originally 2005
Rewritten for princess dawn July august 2015
Copyright © David Scott | Year Posted 2015
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