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If You Were Mine

its how it feels when you loom I always get a tingle down my spine Perhaps the smell of your perfume That is what puts me on cloud nine When everything is doom and gloom You seem to make everything shine just like a flower you too bloom And one that is all so sublime You make my heart go boom! Its how it feels every time And you are the one of whom I write these words so divine This was actually published in a book called between the lines But changed a few lines and the title originally called sublime I thought poem suits you as you are sublime Also expressing again how you make me feel Love always davidxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Written by David Scott originally 2005 Rewritten for princess dawn July august 2015

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Date: 9/24/2015 2:39:00 PM
Did you mean 'dose' or want 'does'? I only clicked on this one, and have to run, but wanted to stop and say, it is beautiful and well-written, and cause to visit your others later ... CayCay
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