If You Think

If You Think...

If you think a love like a mother will exist, there and then  
You must have been building castles in the air and thus 
 Need a medic or an injection to kill that feeling of an outcast-
 A shadow of falsehood you’ve been chasing.
 Friends like mothers will exist no doubt about that
I'm but particular about if boldly will exist in instant world, where 
Sailing through has no backfire or low indignation, where  
 Right to freedom and possession would not be denied, where 
 Behind your backs, you would have all sides’ safety
Like the baby in the mother's womb, or the sun in the sky.
 A bounty ground, a must be aftermath of the journey on free
 Bridge on the cross roads, and lanes, and water, and bushes
 Over the mountain; the rock, the valley and the hill, and on the
 Troubled memory of liquors, women, demigods and kings of miseries?
 Water full of love is only a reservoir for the Creator asides mothers. 
I may be viewed as uncivilized or sound barbaric by this logic, but reasons 
 Will proclaim reality in my tone, stand and modest mood.
 “Ease! Be at ease!!” The breeze from the mothers’ bosom’s recollections sway, that 
Your mind would seek forgiveness and refuge from her, then the All Forgiver. Then true
Mind will redeem and have the lasting rest of his life, yield to and fulfill mother’s wish. 

A.O
19/2/2014

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Note: Mothers addressed here may not necessarily be ones biological mother. It could be he or she who is never sick or tired of listening to you, hearing your plights or problems and helping you proffer solutions to them. He or she never discourages, never over-pampers and pray for your success at all times...
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Kendrick Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 11:16 AM
Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
Hamilton Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 6:33 AM
hi AO congrats on win hugs
Mehta Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 5:45 AM
Flowing verse with lovely acrostic. Congrats on the win.
Harper Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 10:03 PM
Abdulhafeez, very wonderful portrayal of how a mom can be like a friend but more and less, congratulations
Johnson Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 8:03 PM
Some of ours sound so much alike. You took different approach. Impressive. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Jerden Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 7:06 PM
An interesting approach to the theme! Congratulations!
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