If You Love Her

Listen to her with all of you
   Your fists clenched
   Your lips together
   Your head moving, slightly, side to side 

Perched on the edge of your seat
   Tilt your spine forward
   
Search for the soul deep within her eyes
   Gently ... Don't frighten her

Make her feel she is the most important person in the whole world 
   Nothing else matters except what she is telling you 

Hear what is in her voice 
   Her interests ... become yours 
  
Capture her heart
   Never let it go
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roekaerts Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 8:20 PM
That is the way to capture her heart. Sadly no man I know of knows this. Your lady is lucky.
Wolf Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 1:51 PM
Thanks for the acknowledgment, Tansy... I just do the best I can to 'shut-up and listen.' ... Learned from the Patriarch Abraham, whom God told: "Listen 'in' her (Sarah's) voice," meaning that Abraham should hear the tone and timbre of his wife's voice. I.e., he should hear her emotions first and respond to them... Someone once taught me to say 'You sound upset,' or 'You sound frustrated.' Works wonders. Thanks again and Happy Weekend, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 10:55 PM
A poem revisited, Gershon. What awesome wisdom, especially when we realize that we never know what little time we have with our loved ones. A FAVE for sure.
Wolf Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 11:31 PM
So very interesting that I revisited this poem myself at almost exactly the same time that you did! And thank you for the complimentary comment! … Best always, Gershon
Fisher Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 9:01 AM
I will keep this in mind when chosing who deserves my time. I wish I read this a while ago. A fav! Haley
Wolf Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 11:26 AM
Whoa! A fave! I am honored and humbled, Haley ... And to think that a poem of mine might have had and actually might have (going forward) a practical application?! Wow. You have truly made my day. Thank you, thank you for your comments. Best wishes, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 11:14 PM
A gem, Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 3:55 PM
Thank you for shining the light of your eyes on this little poem, Line!! Best wishes, Gershon
Faulkner Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 2:31 PM
My hubby and I are celebrating our 13th in September - part of what keeps us going is he makes me feel like 'the most important person in the whole world' and I try to do the same for him - the last two lines certainly captured me!
Wolf Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 5:05 PM
Very, very good! May you both be in love forever! ~ gw
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 9:23 AM
Swoonworthy ;) wonderful ink my friend! xomo
Wolf Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 8:06 PM
Whoa! Swoonworthy! … I am finally getting somewhere,! I think. Thank you for this important (for me) comment, Maureen! Best wishes, Gershon
Da Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 8:37 AM
This is just so sweet. That is how a man should be..
Wolf Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 8:03 PM
I sure try to be this way. Do I succeed? Maybe … Gotta continue trying! Thanks for checking this one out, Karen! ~ Gershon
Messina Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 8:15 AM
The only way to love a woman...Excellent write, Gershon! Well said and well done! Charlie
Wolf Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 8:06 PM
Thank you for the encouragement, Charlie. ~ Gershon
Allison Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 5:43 AM
oh how romantic GW, and when you find someone like this never let them go:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 8:07 PM
Exactly!! Thanks, Jan! ~ Gershon
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