If You Had An Offer What Would You Do

Can you consent at 16 if you can’t handle the heartbreak? 
Are you developed to deal with the impact it will make? 
when you suffer so much you get lost in the hate, 
refusing to accept this is what you helped create 

Being dumped means you’re put in a powerless position 
and maybe it’s easier to think you always were
but that’s when hindsight can cause a false vision 
where you had no choice though consent did occur 

And you’re too immature to deal with the fact 
you lost the love that you’ll never get back, 
stuck living traumatised under attack 
and not yet developed to get back on track 

Is 16 to young to deal with the worst of it, 
maybe at 18 you haven’t the skills for it, 
21 might make the law seem irrelevant 
making it more about your own development 

A 16 year old girl looking for an older man 
but when that man’s 30 they call it a scam 
one off opportunity or intentional plan 
or maybe us men get whatever we can

How can you judge when you don’t get the offer 
when it happens to you would you choose to not bother 
when you are flattered they want you as a lover 
turning it down to be left thinking bugger 

if her age at present is above age of consent 
then it’s not your place to make a judgement 
you say that it’s wrong as you think of her bent 
you wouldn’t reject something that heaven has sent 

Anger at things that don’t come to you, 
looking down on it with a sense of virtue 
as if it’s disgusting and not what you do 
you’d jump at the chance if it ever came true 

when you’re contradicted use contraception 
with this opportunity make the exception 
feeling as though luck heads in your direction 
don’t turn her down she can’t handle rejection

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 9/20/2023 12:35:00 PM
Well written oh what a controversial view. I'd say 16 is too young for an older man. But only God's judgement matters most!
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