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if you come to me

IF YOU COME TO Me


I will leave behind all the worldly care 
if you come to me ...   
  I will open the secret door to heaven 
  where you can quench your thirst.   
if you come to me....  
I will  remove all the veils for                
your desires  to get salvation .   
if you come to me ....
  I will imprint my love on your walls     
and risk the worst prison !     
if you come to me...
I will commit the heinous crime  to spend a night with you      
only if you come to me...

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Date: 12/26/2017 12:32:00 PM
this poem is sincere; well done -JT
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Date: 5/29/2016 11:45:00 AM
beautifully painted piece red
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Date: 3/12/2016 10:21:00 AM
Very passionate write on forbidden Love, let's hope it doesn't remain unrequieted!
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Date: 3/7/2016 2:22:00 AM
Very seductive and teasing! ok You got me. I'm a fan, where do I sign up? Peace young lady:)
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Date: 3/4/2016 8:41:00 PM
Hi Fiery, Wow, wonderful cadence and rhythm, very soulful and skillfully written--excellent piece! Cheers, Brian
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Date: 3/3/2016 11:15:00 PM
Beautifully passionate, Red. T.J
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Date: 3/1/2016 1:27:00 AM
Very sensual write. Beautiful. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/3/2016 7:45:00 PM
thank you !
Date: 2/29/2016 10:57:00 AM
You tempt with sensually suggestive words; the condition you lay down might be taken up by many:) ~ Regards // paul
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Red Fiery
Date: 2/29/2016 7:01:00 PM
Thank you Paul ! I will be back with more of this kind...:)
Date: 2/27/2016 7:14:00 PM
Worth a second read. Still hot.
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Red Fiery
Date: 2/29/2016 7:02:00 PM
Richard, I am so elated to see your comments...as always ...I will be posting something new( very soon !)
Date: 2/26/2016 11:56:00 AM
ohh, such sweet temptation; how inviting, red... good job!..huggs
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Red Fiery
Date: 2/29/2016 7:03:00 PM
Thank you my dear! You are very kind...I love poems too...:)
Date: 2/26/2016 9:14:00 AM
This is sexy and hot!
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Red Fiery
Date: 2/29/2016 7:03:00 PM
wait for more....
Date: 2/25/2016 11:27:00 AM
Hello Red F., WOW, that's one way to reel in a passionate moment. I see this is your skill to write in and with passion. I like this verse giving it a 7. Always nice to hear from you. LINDA
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Red Fiery
Date: 2/29/2016 7:05:00 PM
Dear Linda, you have been really kind to me...:)
Date: 2/25/2016 8:58:00 AM
Back with passion in every line, Red. Your writing is beautiful...as are you. :)
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Red Fiery
Date: 2/29/2016 7:06:00 PM
Thank you my dearest !