Red Fiery Poet Free verse

If You Come To Me

IF YOU COME TO Me


I will leave behind all the worldly care 
if you come to me ...   
  I will open the secret door to heaven 
  where you can quench your thirst.   
if you come to me....  
I will  remove all the veils for                
your desires  to get salvation .   
if you come to me ....
  I will imprint my love on your walls     
and risk the worst prison !     
if you come to me...
I will commit the heinous crime  to spend a night with you      
only if you come to me...

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Honestly J.T. December 26, 2017 at 12:32 PM this poem is sincere; well done -JT

Liam Mcdaid May 29, 2016 at 11:45 AM beautifully painted piece red

John-Ovan.P. Hull March 12, 2016 at 10:21 AM Very passionate write on forbidden Love, let's hope it doesn't remain unrequieted!

Daniel Turner March 7, 2016 at 2:22 AM Very seductive and teasing! ok You got me. I'm a fan, where do I sign up? Peace young lady:)

Brian Mcclain March 4, 2016 at 8:41 PM Hi Fiery, Wow, wonderful cadence and rhythm, very soulful and skillfully written--excellent piece! Cheers, Brian

Ravi Sathasivam March 1, 2016 at 1:27 AM Very sensual write. Beautiful. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it Red Fiery March 3, 2016 at 7:45 PM thank you !

Paul Callus February 29, 2016 at 10:57 AM You tempt with sensually suggestive words; the condition you lay down might be taken up by many:) ~ Regards // paul Red Fiery February 29, 2016 at 7:01 PM Thank you Paul ! I will be back with more of this kind...:)

Richard Lamoureux February 27, 2016 at 7:14 PM Worth a second read. Still hot. Red Fiery February 29, 2016 at 7:02 PM Richard, I am so elated to see your comments...as always ...I will be posting something new( very soon !)

Nette Onclaud February 26, 2016 at 11:56 AM ohh, such sweet temptation; how inviting, red... good job!..huggs Red Fiery February 29, 2016 at 7:03 PM Thank you my dear! You are very kind...I love poems too...:)

Richard Lamoureux February 26, 2016 at 9:14 AM This is sexy and hot! Red Fiery February 29, 2016 at 7:03 PM wait for more....

Poet Destroyer A February 25, 2016 at 11:27 AM Hello Red F., WOW, that's one way to reel in a passionate moment. I see this is your skill to write in and with passion. I like this verse giving it a 7. Always nice to hear from you. LINDA Red Fiery February 29, 2016 at 7:05 PM Dear Linda, you have been really kind to me...:)

Eileen Manassian February 25, 2016 at 8:58 AM Back with passion in every line, Red. Your writing is beautiful...as are you. :) Red Fiery February 29, 2016 at 7:06 PM Thank you my dearest !