If You Care

If you care and i care

And we all care

The world would more fair

In oneness and in pair


They fall and we fall

They fail and we fail even more

They suffer and we feel it too to the core

They fight and in those wars its also our souls


Blood drips through those diamonds

And to the stores we run buying those expensive items

It's infront of our eyes yet we ignore the sirens

Nothing is better until we act and start those dialogues

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/29/2015 10:34:00 AM
Very well written! Definitely a 7!!! :)
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Date: 11/12/2015 7:06:00 AM
If we all made this a monologue within ourselves....there would be hope even for our Kenya now with all the hate speeches being charged... I really love your poem Njeri!
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 11/17/2015 2:13:00 PM
i agree. thank you so much Lydia.
Date: 11/11/2015 2:42:00 AM
I can feel the passion of love and reality wrapped within your excellently penned poem Njeri. Stat blessed my friend I enjoy reading you.............A.M.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 11/17/2015 2:12:00 PM
thank you so much Afolabi
Date: 11/10/2015 9:17:00 PM
Oh Njeri, this is just so well expressed and said, such a beautiful poem! If only we truly all attempted to do just that! What a better world we would have!
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 11/17/2015 2:12:00 PM
that's right. thank you so much Arthur
Date: 11/9/2015 8:38:00 AM
A call to reason and understanding of each others needs very well expressed with many clear messages, dear njeri hunjeri!
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 11/10/2015 10:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Demetrios
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