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If Wings Were Mine

If wings were mine to take the air I’d worry not, why would I care Imagine all the things I’d see If wings were mine to set me free Reflected by the aqua seas I’d spin and twirl as if to tease I’d wave to mermaids every day and catch a kiss along the way I’d tickle treetops with the dawn And if I should begin to yawn With clouds for pillows all around No need to ever touch the ground If wings were mine to take the air I’d brush the sunshine with my hair Just think how happy I would be If wings were mine to set me free 8/8/21

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Date: 9/8/2021 8:30:00 AM
A beautiful, soothing poem. I especially loved the line, ..."I'd tickle treetops with the dawn..." I'm faving this one!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/8/2021 9:18:00 AM
Thank you so much Ann!!!
Date: 9/2/2021 3:57:00 PM
Mike, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my contest ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/3/2021 4:20:00 AM
Thank you so much constance, I am so glad that you liked it !!! Happy Friday!
Date: 8/13/2021 7:16:00 PM
I just love this poem. It is perfectly composed. It is beautiful and at the same time a bit whimsical. Just delightful
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/14/2021 6:04:00 AM
Thank you so much Barbara!!
Date: 8/13/2021 1:45:00 AM
Beautifully Written. Congratulations on your win!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/13/2021 8:57:00 AM
Thanks so much!!!
Date: 8/9/2021 7:01:00 PM
Picture-perfect, Mike. Right into my faves. What imaginative poetry should look like and read like! Thanks, Gershon
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/10/2021 3:51:00 AM
That's so kind of you Gershon, Thanks!!
Date: 8/9/2021 9:29:00 AM
absolutely delightful Mike the imagery is so gorgeous, adding this gem of my rhyme to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/9/2021 10:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Jan xxoo

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