If We Run Out of Gas

If we run out of gas, can we fill up somewhere A station for such and to drop off our old foul air Might have trouble hiring Coz of the hazy o-ring Something to consider as we age, c'est la guerre!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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November 14, 2017 at 4:32 PM
Awww... nice one Jack!
Ellison Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 4:42 PM
It's 5 hours time difference between us which means as I'm writing, it's 10:40 there!!! Sleep tight!
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November 14, 2017 at 8:55 AM
Giggle :) nice one Jack! xomo
Ellison Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 9:00 AM
Keep om a-giggling Miss Mo! It's good for the soul! Lovesies, Jacko!!! xxx
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November 14, 2017 at 8:39 AM
Some folks retire, you just re-gas//Fill your tank, make a re-pass//fogging those folks//with silly jokes//and fumes from your pancake-flat a**!!! WAR IS HELL! Whoops, did I say pancake again?
Flats Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 9:12 AM
I used to have a repeter. Now it is barely a single shot!
Ellison Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 9:03 AM
You did! You're REPEATING YOURSELF! Get it, repeating... in fine form today!!! War IS hell!
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November 14, 2017 at 6:18 AM
Your are writing awesome and tremendous poems here my friend! What a fabulous write this one truly is! You have amazed me yet again with a write that causes one to run out of gas, alas, I'm sure it will pass! Great Work!!
Ellison Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 6:21 AM
It usually does pass a number of times a day!!! lol
Allison Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 6:09 AM
ha ha ha love it Jack and it's not just something that affects the old lol:-) hugs jan x
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November 14, 2017 at 6:20 AM
I wonder in one single day how many farts explode throughout the world!!! Must be astronomical!!! LOL xxx
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