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If We Run Out of Gas

If we run out of gas, can we fill up somewhere A station for such and to drop off our old foul air Might have trouble hiring Coz of the hazy o-ring Something to consider as we age, c'est la guerre!

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Silent One

Date: 11/14/2017 4:32:00 PM

Awww... nice one Jack!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/14/2017 4:42:00 PM

It's 5 hours time difference between us which means as I'm writing, it's 10:40 there!!! Sleep tight!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/14/2017 8:55:00 AM

Giggle :) nice one Jack! xomo

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/14/2017 9:00:00 AM

Keep om a-giggling Miss Mo! It's good for the soul! Lovesies, Jacko!!! xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/14/2017 8:39:00 AM

Some folks retire, you just re-gas//Fill your tank, make a re-pass//fogging those folks//with silly jokes//and fumes from your pancake-flat a**!!! WAR IS HELL! Whoops, did I say pancake again?

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 11/14/2017 9:12:00 AM

I used to have a repeter. Now it is barely a single shot!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/14/2017 9:03:00 AM

You did! You're REPEATING YOURSELF! Get it, repeating... in fine form today!!! War IS hell!

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/14/2017 6:18:00 AM

Your are writing awesome and tremendous poems here my friend! What a fabulous write this one truly is! You have amazed me yet again with a write that causes one to run out of gas, alas, I'm sure it will pass! Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/14/2017 6:21:00 AM

It usually does pass a number of times a day!!! lol

Jan Allison

Date: 11/14/2017 6:09:00 AM

ha ha ha love it Jack and it's not just something that affects the old lol:-) hugs jan x

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/14/2017 6:20:00 AM

I wonder in one single day how many farts explode throughout the world!!! Must be astronomical!!! LOL xxx