if time can echo

'What does the ticking of a melting clock sound like?'—overheard in Dalí
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A clock made from ice
lies on sun-scolded tiles—

the ticks go
slower,
           steadier,
                        harder—
as the pool of water
grows,
           wakes,
                      devours—

The ticks become a pounding 
beat
as the clock melts 
into throbbing muscles
From timeless to time—
From time to flowing blood—

When forms collapse into echoes...
that’s when the carol ends.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Fowler Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 6:39 AM
Oh Jasmine...such emotion in your write! Congratulations! :)
Tsai Avatar
June 16, 2025 at 2:50 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Linda <3 It means a lot.
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