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if time can echo

'What does the ticking of a melting clock sound like?'—overheard in Dalí
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A clock made from ice
lies on sun-scolded tiles—

the ticks go
slower,
           steadier,
                        harder—
as the pool of water
grows,
           wakes,
                      devours—

The ticks become a pounding 
beat
as the clock melts 
into throbbing muscles
From timeless to time—
From time to flowing blood—

When forms collapse into echoes...
that’s when the carol ends.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 6/15/2025 6:39:00 AM
Oh Jasmine...such emotion in your write! Congratulations! :)
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Jasmine Tsai
Date: 6/16/2025 2:50:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Linda <3 It means a lot.

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