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If This Isn'T Love

This feeling... feet fairly skipping knees a bit wobbly the lump in the throat Heart pounding away lips drier than crackers arms cloaked with gooseflesh head spinning like a gyroscope If this isn't love, it is quite the distraction ~ ~ Believe me, I'm feeling sheer stupefaction

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Date: 11/11/2021 12:04:00 PM
This sounds like love "I'm feeling sheer stupefaction" to me.
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Date: 11/10/2021 7:00:00 PM
I love it Gershon! I found this very musical! Panagiota
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Date: 11/9/2021 11:06:00 AM
Absolute amazement, or total oblivion, surprised, stupefied, all of these, not understanding why you had these butterflies in your tummy, love my friend does strange things to us. Hugs and blessngs, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/9/2021 1:48:00 PM
Either that, or COVID... lol. Thanks, Jennifer
Date: 11/9/2021 10:52:00 AM
Are we back to Pharaoh moans? ditto Terry! Aloha!
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Date: 11/9/2021 1:46:00 PM
Pharaoh? You mean Pharaoh Sanders, the jazz artist, of course. lol. :) gw
Date: 11/9/2021 1:39:00 AM
Of course, it could just be covid. I’d get a test if I were you. Have to say, it does sound like love… or so my wife tells me! Terry
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/9/2021 1:43:00 PM
Covid and Love -- two extremes which kiss at their polar ends. :) gw
Date: 11/9/2021 1:19:00 AM
If you’re still in stupefaction then it’s an ongoing attraction and yes it truly is love… Belle
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/9/2021 1:22:00 PM
Just glad it's not Covid, Belle. lol. :) gw
Date: 11/8/2021 11:44:00 PM
Definitely this is love or a some distraction as you feel ! All the 'symptoms' adhere closely to love . Enjoyed this semi witty and semi serious poem, dear poet friend
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/9/2021 1:12:00 PM
Thank for your lovely visit and for all of your encouragement, Valsa. Happy Tuesday to you! Light and Joy, Gershon

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