If This Isn'T Love

This feeling...
  feet fairly skipping
knees a bit wobbly
  the lump in the throat

Heart pounding away
  lips drier than crackers
arms cloaked with gooseflesh
  head spinning like a gyroscope
    
If this isn't love, it is quite the distraction ~
  ~ Believe me, I'm feeling sheer stupefaction
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Krutsinger Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 12:04 PM
This sounds like love "I'm feeling sheer stupefaction" to me.
Romios Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 7:00 PM
I love it Gershon! I found this very musical! Panagiota
Proxenos Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 11:06 AM
Absolute amazement, or total oblivion, surprised, stupefied, all of these, not understanding why you had these butterflies in your tummy, love my friend does strange things to us. Hugs and blessngs, Jennifer.
Wolf Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 1:48 PM
Either that, or COVID... lol. Thanks, Jennifer
Leffanta Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 10:52 AM
Are we back to Pharaoh moans? ditto Terry! Aloha!
Wolf Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 1:46 PM
Pharaoh? You mean Pharaoh Sanders, the jazz artist, of course. lol. :) gw
Flood Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 1:39 AM
Of course, it could just be covid. I’d get a test if I were you. Have to say, it does sound like love… or so my wife tells me! Terry
Wolf Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 1:43 PM
Covid and Love -- two extremes which kiss at their polar ends. :) gw
Edmonds  Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 1:19 AM
If you’re still in stupefaction then it’s an ongoing attraction and yes it truly is love… Belle
Wolf Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 1:22 PM
Just glad it's not Covid, Belle. lol. :) gw
George Avatar
November 8, 2021 at 11:44 PM
Definitely this is love or a some distraction as you feel ! All the 'symptoms' adhere closely to love . Enjoyed this semi witty and semi serious poem, dear poet friend
Wolf Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 1:12 PM
Thank for your lovely visit and for all of your encouragement, Valsa. Happy Tuesday to you! Light and Joy, Gershon
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