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If These Walls Could Talk

If these walls could talk They would say “Take a look” Hey young lady! Why your room is so messy? You’re always very busy Doing your other duty Well, I know the reason why You just control yourself not to cry The pain you’ve been experienced To whom you love ever since And to overcome it all You only faced me and your tears will fall How many times I’ve witnessed your attempt To take many sleeping pills just to end The sadness you feel it in your heart That you keep it from the very start If these walls could talk They will say “can you forget everything?” And try to fix all your things? Just like your life, it must be in order again September 15, 2012

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Date: 9/7/2013 11:11:00 PM
I remember this one, a blast from the past these old poems we can come back to see!!!
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Date: 9/8/2013 9:57:00 AM
thanks friend andrea :) Belated Happy birthday again :) hugsss
Date: 9/29/2012 1:05:00 PM
love this thoughtful write, my friend
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Date: 9/15/2012 8:30:00 PM
ops! this is another one i've enjoyed!!! congratulations of a well-done poem, my dear! i'm very proud of you, too! hugs:) norie
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Date: 9/15/2012 7:53:00 PM
You will meet many other men in your lifetime. Your breaking up may have been a blessing in disguise. You have a decent write.
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Date: 9/15/2012 9:44:00 AM
This was a good way to take the challenge having the wall try to talk sense into you. Very well done!!
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Date: 9/15/2012 9:29:00 AM
I think it's best that walls can not talk, there may be many sad and unpleasant stories. Wish you luck in the contest Maria. Have a lovely weekend. oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/15/2012 8:59:00 AM
Very good personification in this poem.Love this.Best wishes.
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Date: 9/15/2012 6:47:00 AM
God already did it. Cheer up, my friend Maria. Good write :) Love ya, Toquyen
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