Robert Gorelick Poet Quatrain

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If Romeo and Juliet Had Survived

I was warned about you lazy Montagues
Some Romeo you turned out to be!
You’re so flabby you can’t see your own shoes
Where for art thou?  Watching sports on TV!

Enough, Juliet, you’ve turned into your mother
With your nagging, complaining, and ceaseless spending
All you Capulet women just hover and smother
How I yearn for Shakespeare’s grand ending!
10/13/22

Middle-aged crisis is one topic which William Shakespeare stayed away from.

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Panagiota Romios October 15, 2022 at 1:06 PM Robert, such great imagination you have and sense of humor! I envy you, This is really hysterical, besides being a good quatrain. Wunderbar! Huggs, Pangie Robert Gorelick October 15, 2022 at 5:03 PM Thou art most kind, me lady! Robert

Victor Buhagiar October 14, 2022 at 7:50 AM This poem is a great fun. You change the characters very well. Robert Gorelick October 14, 2022 at 11:24 AM Middle-aged crisis is one topic which William Shakespeare stayed away from! Thank you, Victor! Robert

Michael Tor October 13, 2022 at 6:04 PM lol Great Poetry my friend... Robert Gorelick October 13, 2022 at 6:15 PM Thou art kind to me, my good man! Lol