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If Only You Knew

"The wind haul off the leaves in the afternoon lull as memories are taken with it." Quote by poet
If only you knew How much I loved you. My thoughts lay on the leave's dew As the brilliant day slowly fades through In the distant horizon over play in a meaningful melodious ambient way To the instrumentation lavender field. A young couple stand if it was a lifetime Among the bluegrass and lavender bouquet scent. They search the depth of each other's eyes With love in their hearts. They grow, use to the moment rhythms As a little peace descend With the whisper breath of the wind. Once upon a time, We used to be that couple. 5/15/2024
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Jangid Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 9:51 PM
Nicely painted emotions in lavender field. But i don't know why you said,' once upon a time'. We should try to recreate the scene everywhere at everytime if we can. Amazing Have a good day
Jangid Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 8:01 PM
Sorry, I didn't know about your husband. It was only poetic comment. I never think to hurt anyone.
Roper Avatar
May 24, 2024 at 8:41 AM
Arjun, "once upon a time" was written because my husband passed 6 years now. Thank you for your wonderful comment.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 1:06 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lonely "If only you knew" write. Great quote... Great memories are the best kind to have. Enjoy your day, enjoy your win..................
One Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 11:13 AM
So beautiful and tender.. some memories remain forever.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Buhagiar Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 10:39 AM
Oh those memories we can never forget. If only we knew. Loved your poem. Best for a win.
Cunningham Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 7:34 AM
We never forget those early days Eve, they stay with us forever. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Mcintosh Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 11:11 PM
Lovely write. Yes. Young love, but even when we're old... it is still as fresh as the thought. God bless you, much love, Gina
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