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If only you knew… the anguish that gripped my heart trying to fathom midst clemency’s understanding justification for your juvenile freedom-driven departure… If only you knew… the fervent supplication of my soul beseeching the Lord after learning of your accident causing you to forget… yet uttering “Mommy”* when you gained consciousness**… If only you knew… the elated spirit I now possess when days ago, you called yearning along prayer request: “I want to go back home.”*** … then you would thank God**** for mother’s love and faith.
*I became his Mommy in the orphanage for more than a decade before he was placed in his foster home. **He had a motorcycle accident on June 24, 2020. ***He personally called me on October 21, 2020, informing that he's well. ****1Thessalonians 5:18 In every thing give thanks: for this is the will of God in Christ Jesus concerning you. October 26, 2020

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Date: 10/27/2020 3:38:00 PM
Loved reading this poem, Dear Poet. It shows who you are - your kindness for the unfortunate! Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 10/26/2020 8:35:00 PM
Ok dear one, tears! Those beloved children, how they grip our hearts. How we rejoice in them and mourn for them. I'm rejoicing that he called you, in tears for the journey that he's been on that lead to your heart break and his injury. I'm so glad he called and wanted you to pray for him. God bless you and your son <3
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