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If Only We Could Rewrite

If I could fly like Superman My, wouldn't that be sweet Then I could hold you dearly in my arms as I swept you right off of your feet If I could travel back in time to go anywhere I wanted to be I would find the moment you first smiled at me and relive it indefinitly Now if I made a wish on some far away shooting star and if wishing really made wishes come true You and I would live our lives together, happily because I truly love you But I can do none of these made of only flesh and bone you see Just a man who wishes we would go back To when you were still in love with me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/11/2011 9:09:00 AM
What a sad ending! Still, I love the wishful thinking...congratulations on your poem being featured this week. i'm glad i saw it!
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Date: 7/10/2011 12:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week David. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/10/2011 10:11:00 AM
A whimsical poem that plays on one's heartstrings. Well written and most enjoyable to read. Congratulations on having this featured. Regards
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Date: 7/10/2011 8:18:00 AM
Oh why I could relate sooo well To be winged I dream so I can fly to my damsel! An utterly lovable write here, David! Wish I could be as intrepid!
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