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If Only, Maybe, Sometimes'

If only,Maybe,sometimes’ I am the root of the idea that you plant in your soul with a firm grip taking hold If only,Maybe,sometimes’ I am the whisper of the leaves talking to your conscience that only touches lightly like a breeze If only,Maybe,sometimes’ I am the fragrance of flowers that smells of comfort for all of your waking hours If only,Maybe,sometimes’ I am the sound of rain that lulls you into a dreamless sleep and wakes you up when the clouds are no more If only, Maybe, sometimes’ I am the colour of the rainbow that brightens your day and makes your troubles vanish away If only, Maybe, sometimes’ I am the hands that hold you close and feels cool to the touch and comforts when your feeling low 10.5.2021 Sponsor: William Kekaula Contest: 'Say It Again'

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Date: 8/7/2020 10:34:00 PM
Every element you've mentioned in your verses portrays layers of emotions Carol. Such a beauty this is. Congratulations on your win :)
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/8/2020 2:26:00 AM
Thanks a ton Aditi....much love.
Date: 8/6/2020 7:43:00 AM
Great use of metaphors dear Carol sir, Each of your splendid lines are so soothing and comforting.Enjoyed your wonderful poem. Congratulations on your great win.:-)Keep inspiring.Take care.Warm regards sent to you:-)~Deepa:-)
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Date: 8/6/2020 6:17:00 AM
Congratulations, Carol! This is a lovely piece - each stanza brings a joy! I like the way you have woven each stanza beginning with the theme phrases. Love, Mala
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/6/2020 6:28:00 AM
Thank you Mala....much appreciated.
Date: 8/5/2020 11:04:00 AM
- A lovely poem, it comforts many hearts Carol :) ... Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/5/2020 7:07:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine Smile.
Date: 8/5/2020 9:37:00 AM
Congrats on your winning entry. God bless you
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/5/2020 9:44:00 AM
Thank you Regina.
Date: 8/5/2020 7:14:00 AM
I liked the repetition in your poem and the feel of loyalty and commitment.. nice comparisons through each stanza.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/5/2020 7:38:00 AM
Thank you....much appreciated.

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