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I write poetry with a bleeding pen, sharing my grief, sorrow, tears and my love; as past inklings come again and again. Mom left with the dignity of a dove, always so kind with a voice like a balm; if only I had grace like mom above. When dad spoke he was always very calm, he was serene, soothing and wanted peace; if only I remembered his fav' psalms. Grandma died old and death gave her release, she left me her heavenly shining light; if only I could hold each whispered piece. With God and Jesus to help I am strong, and my future is full of Zen and hope; if only I could have changed all the wrong. If only I knew just how I will cope- I write poetry with a bleeding pen; and my future is full of Zen and hope, as past inklings come again and again. ___________________ April 17, 2023 Poetry/Terzanelle/If Only Inklings Copyright Protected, ID 04-1541-095-17 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, Inklings sponsor, Regina McIntosh, Judged 05/28/2023 Third Place

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Date: 5/29/2023 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 5/30/2023 1:41:00 PM
Sara, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment !
Date: 5/28/2023 10:34:00 AM
Past is past. You can not change it. Think of present, you can shape it. Zen will give you peace, Stay Blessed.
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Date: 5/29/2023 6:41:00 AM
Jay, thank you so much for the comment, appreciate !
Date: 5/28/2023 3:39:00 AM
Your poem connects me to my past... I did not experience much the love of parents... But I'm glad I had my loving grandparents who raised me hard through poverty... Congratulations dear...
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Constance La France
Date: 5/29/2023 6:42:00 AM
Roger, thank you so much for the heartfelt comment, thank you for sharing with me, and for the congratulations !
Date: 5/28/2023 2:37:00 AM
so beautifully done. brilliant writing. God bless you and congrats, Love, Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 5/29/2023 6:42:00 AM
Gina, thank you so much for the contest and my placement, and the compliment and congrats !
Date: 4/18/2023 5:01:00 AM
Hi Constance, Never put a bandaid on that pen for you will stifle the gift God has blessed you with. Always a fan, Blessings Carl
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Constance La France
Date: 4/18/2023 7:58:00 AM
Carl, thank you so much for the nice comment and compliment, blessings !

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