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If Only Inklings

 
I write poetry with a bleeding pen, sharing my grief, sorrow, tears and my love; as past inklings come again and again. Mom left with the dignity of a dove, always so kind with a voice like a balm; if only I had grace like mom above. When dad spoke he was always very calm, he was serene, soothing and wanted peace; if only I remembered his fav' psalms. Grandma died old and death gave her release, she left me her heavenly shining light; if only I could hold each whispered piece. With God and Jesus to help I am strong, and my future is full of Zen and hope; if only I could have changed all the wrong. If only I knew just how I will cope- I write poetry with a bleeding pen; and my future is full of Zen and hope, as past inklings come again and again. ___________________ April 17, 2023 Poetry/Terzanelle/If Only Inklings Copyright Protected, ID 04-1541-095-17 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, Inklings sponsor, Regina McIntosh, Judged 05/28/2023 Third Place
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Kendrick Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 9:35 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara
La France Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 1:41 PM
Sara, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment !
Roger  Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 3:39 AM
Your poem connects me to my past... I did not experience much the love of parents... But I'm glad I had my loving grandparents who raised me hard through poverty... Congratulations dear...
La France Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 6:42 AM
Roger, thank you so much for the heartfelt comment, thank you for sharing with me, and for the congratulations !
Mcintosh Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 2:37 AM
so beautifully done. brilliant writing. God bless you and congrats, Love, Gina
La France Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 6:42 AM
Gina, thank you so much for the contest and my placement, and the compliment and congrats !
Fraser Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 5:01 AM
Hi Constance, Never put a bandaid on that pen for you will stifle the gift God has blessed you with. Always a fan, Blessings Carl
La France Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 7:58 AM
Carl, thank you so much for the nice comment and compliment, blessings !
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