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If Only I Could Love Myself

To love you Red , is a pride,
to weep in your tears is my desire....
to be a recipient of your charm is Life
''You are the dazzling star, the purest dream
a river to the most beautiful stream....

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/28/2016 1:42:00 AM

I love you too..... Pashang

Robert Johnson

Date: 6/16/2016 12:41:00 PM

With a face like yours, I can't imagine. Looking in the mirror, not letting love in. When you discover the magic cure. That's when you'll know that love is pure.

Anand Parmale

Date: 5/17/2016 9:22:00 PM

You are so lovely Red coz you love yourself.... When you love yourself your charm sets others to love you as well....Lovely write my loving friend!!!

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/30/2016 3:07:00 PM

If we love not ourselves and do not strive to better ourselves then how can anybody else love us?? Great and deep poem in such few words my friend. I too, often get down on myself but remember later to rise up and walk a greater mile! Stay the "purest dream" my friend and life will bring sweet joy unbound..A7

Funom Makama

Date: 4/30/2016 2:38:00 PM

I simply lack words and compliments for this fine piece and for this I say.... Blessed art thou whom pens a glorious piece with expressive lines and touching words... For the thee, I add to my profound group of favourites. A definite 7!

James Inman

Date: 4/26/2016 10:15:00 AM

Lovely emotional write.

Anand Parmale

Date: 4/25/2016 10:23:00 AM

Love and Red Fiery both at their best...So so so sweet write....And thank you very much for your encouraging comments to my poem dear friend...

Robert Pettit

Date: 4/1/2016 10:47:00 AM

A fanciful introspection in just a few lines.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/30/2016 7:07:00 PM

WOW, Red, you shared painful emotions when love is attached. Loving ourselves should be the first thing we do every day. I'm glad I stopped by. Love LINDA

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/29/2016 7:56:00 AM

The love of self Is an important component of being able to love others. "Love the Lord God With all your Heart and love your neighbor as yourself."

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/29/2016 7:56:00 AM

It's good to see you writing.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/28/2016 10:09:00 AM

It's fun finding older poems that you forgot about ... like finding a fragment of your former self. "You are the dazzling star, the purest dream a river to the most beautiful stream" ... such pretty lines, Red. Confidence is a beautiful thing ... hard to love others if you don't love yourself first. Might sound strange, but it has a ring of truth to it. Enjoyed the read.

Red Fiery
Date: 3/28/2016 10:44:00 AM

I agree with you.. When are you posting a fiery poem... Plz let me know... Hugs Red

Paul Callus

Date: 3/27/2016 4:29:00 AM

It is a pleasure to be reading this poem once again, Red, after I read it elsewhere yesterday! It is only short, but your emotions are unmistakably powerful! Self addressed, but it could so easily have been expressed to you by your reader:) #7 hugs / paul

Red Fiery
Date: 3/28/2016 10:46:00 AM

I had some readers in the last and they expressed their feelings... Nothing abt falling in Love... It's a painful Joy... :))))Hugs and hugs Red