If Only

If Only

When I was a dot on my mummy’s knee
I wish I had listened to what she told me
She was so wise, I was just not
She knew much more than I’ve ever forgot

I was her baby, she was my mum
I wish I could change half the things I've done
I rewarded her daily by driving her mad
Causing her heartache and making her sad

Blaming her always that life wasn’t fair
Loudly declaring she didn’t care
Yet no matter how heated life had become
She still stood beside me ‘cos she was my mum

The day she took flight and this life did depart
It left such a dreadful hole in my heart
Don’t do what I did, don’t make my mistakes
Stay close to your mothers for goodness sake.

                                                            Heather Buxton 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/25/2016 7:44:00 PM
HEATHER, Excellent poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
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Date: 5/4/2015 2:53:00 AM
You are a poet like no other. You play with the words like another Shakespeare and yet knock home such a crucial point...The irreplaceable place a mother holds. I will change the way I view mum because you wrote this! 7++++++++++++!!!
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Heather Buxton
Date: 5/4/2015 2:45:00 PM
What a lovely thing to say, thank you Hannington :)
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