If Only

Saturation by
commercial enterprise
the bright illuminations
of Christmas dazzle
sincerity and simplicity,
alas if only i could see
through the eyes of a 
bygone childhood
the flame
the peace
the spirit of the eve,
the truth
the reason
naive
believe.
If only i could see
through one’s eyes.
The way it use to be!

© Harry J Horsman  2010

nostalgiafree verse

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Vladislav Raven

November 10, 2018 at 9:07 AM

Hi Harry, dropping by with my congratulations on your much desedved win in the contest. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend....Mike.

Andrea Dietrich

August 24, 2012 at 8:28 PM

wow, such a profound one on the way we think about Xmas, becoming so jaded with time. I am so happy when I come back and find ones like this that I never had seen yet.

Joe Maverick

November 30, 2010 at 1:42 PM

the way exists it allways will, and although in this poem you see the loss of a childhood innocence, there have been many lossses of such, even to the extent of herods murders of the young boys, again in an attempt to remove the (way) before the foundation stone was laid! so all the while the way is there so is hope! anyway it has given me food for thought, Harry so i have enjoyed the read on more than one level.thank you.Joe.

Audrey Haick

November 26, 2010 at 8:27 PM

I don't know Harry...I feel that those days are gone forever...lost..even if you try to bring back those day for your children to "taste" the powers that be will not let you! We can only be grateful for memories and try to pass on the true meaning of Christmas to them. Hope all is well. Love, Audrey

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 23, 2010 at 1:24 PM

Thanks for rendering thoughts as everyone would like to express, harry

Carolyn Devonshire

November 23, 2010 at 8:19 AM

This is exactly how I feel, Harry. Thanks for letting us know we are not alone in concerns about the lost meaning of the holiday. So nice to hear from you again. Hope you have a wonderful holiday season! Peace, blessings and love, Carolyn