If Only

White powder chaser Her eyes stare like a lost soul Statistic is she http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/loss-5.php
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
August 27, 2010 at 3:04 PM
The poweder chasers are destroying their health and chances for happy lives. Very sad, but it's a widespread problem here in the states too, James. Powerful senryu! Love, Carolyn
Neels Avatar
August 27, 2010 at 6:00 AM
Great write James, this is sad but what's even worse is that this is happening almoste everywhere and everyday..
Culverhouse Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 5:42 PM
sounds sad and such a waste.
Gorelick Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 2:15 PM
So sad, but what a nicely written piece. BG
Sweetheart Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 2:02 PM
Very visual James ..could feel the emotion in your lines luv.. enjoyed..
A   Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 12:26 PM
statistic, nice one with deep thoughts to it, enjoyed..P.D.
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