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If only I could soar across the multifarious stars, Dream of love and romance, And maybe plant a seed on each and every-one. If only I could walk the boundless ocean, A breathless pull and richly pleased of its bestowment, And maybe savor each briny tear If only I could be beneath the lapis sky, Hear the cry of every newborn baby's first breath, And maybe I might share the love of each. If only I could embrace the world under fervent heaven, Grace it with a garden paradise brimming with life, And maybe spend hours abreast it's paternal growth. If only I could soar across the multifarious stars, Walk the boundless ocean, Be beneath the lapis sky, Embrace the world under fervent heaven, Or Sometimes just be myself 8/1/2020 If Only, Maybe, Sometimes Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 8/9/2020 10:11:00 AM
Ah, the "if only's" of a life that longs to reach out and change the world with love - something you have done just by being you with your wonderful poem! Congratulations on your win! hugs and blessings to you dear friend!
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Date: 8/8/2020 2:19:00 AM
This is so soothing and delicately penned Eve. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)
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Date: 8/6/2020 9:29:00 PM
A powerfully theme-condensing closing stanza. Well, I'd say it's a lot better to be your true, unadulterated self...though the idyllic lapis azure's heights and the deep's briny fathoms do honestly sound like far temptingly kinkier treats, too!
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Date: 8/6/2020 8:41:00 AM
Such delicate wishes dear Eve mam.:-) Loved your wonderful Muse.Congratulations on your win.:-)Keep inspiring.Take care.Much love:-)
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Date: 8/5/2020 11:29:00 AM
- No matter how you turn it around, well done is much better than well said, dear Eve :) - A lovely poem :) - Congratulations on your win - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/5/2020 8:06:00 AM
If only life was so simple, how beautiful it would be.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 8/2/2020 2:39:00 PM
you took that theme and SOARED with it. Wait till you see what I did with it. OH boy!! I bet yours will skyrocket to a top placement.
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Date: 8/2/2020 9:05:00 AM
If only...If only...I am stuck right here...All the best Eve
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Date: 8/2/2020 6:55:00 AM
Splendid write, Eve! Well-deserving of a top win in the contest. Best of luck - Bob
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Date: 8/2/2020 6:14:00 AM
Yes..if only I could be myself, who I do hope I can be. I love your words dear friend. Many prayers and blessings, Gina
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Date: 8/2/2020 3:14:00 AM
An extraordinary poem that lifts one's soul to heaven dearest, Eve! Hugs xxx
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Date: 8/1/2020 10:15:00 PM
To “share the love of each newborn” - what a fantastic thought Eve. The entire poem is beautiful.
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